Reaching for the Moon (three) - ByaRen - NC-17

Jul 29, 2007 06:47

Pairing: Byakuya/Renji
Word Count: 5369
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Okay, well, you guys really must inspire me. o_O ( Read more... )

byaren, bleach

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silverharmony July 29 2007, 15:27:05 UTC
Yay for update! ♥

Uwahh, I'm torn between being frustrated and delighted that Byakuya is being so hard-to-get. xD

Can't wait for the next part!

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Awww Poor Renji and poor Bya! evildrem July 29 2007, 16:05:49 UTC
..what atangled mess of emotions. I love the way you are showing how Bay is just hoplessly mired in what he wants and what he thinks he should do and the fact has no real defence against Renji's refreshing bluntness.

For some reason reluctant!Bya and pushy!Renji is unfeasibly hot. Can't wait for more..

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iltb July 29 2007, 16:45:16 UTC
1. WOOOT new chapter!

2. Damn, poor Renji. Talk about having your mind and heart fucked with. =(. I can't imagine how painful and insulting it is being given a chance to be with the one you want, only to have them act like a statue. Can't really blame Byakuya though. He's got big time issues.

3. MOAAARRRR NAUUUUUUUUUUU!!!

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chloevien July 29 2007, 19:37:00 UTC
Byakuya has PMS, that's why he is so moody:) He walks on very thin ice, and plays with my emotion, but still wanna read more:)
Thank you and lots of love for you:)
xxx
Chloevien

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crowseye July 29 2007, 22:43:17 UTC
I love this chapter! Byaren angst is the best :>). I am fine with fluff too, but with this pairing I think angst is much more believable. And it makes a perfect sense that Byakuya is hesitating - seriosly, people, how many of you are willing to sleep with somebody on like second date or something - well, I know it's a special case with these two, but still! And poor Byakuya is a virgin after all (OMG this sounds just wrong %>)).

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