Mmmm, Candy :D

[thisisnotavirus]

TITLE: Mmmm, Candy
CHARACTERS: Whiplasher(Andreas) Cat(Eric) Skinny(Jonas) Nightmare(Emil) Bone(Ole)
PAIRING: Whiplasher/Cat
RATING: NC17
SUMMARY: Whip's vivid dreams finally come true.
LEGNTH: 3000 words

This is my first Deathstars fan fic, so it's probably OOC and not too great. Plus it's been months since I've wrote PWP. It was inspired by seeing them

Comments

[niela_xxx]

yay! Candy porn, a way to make me happy. ^^ it was really hot, at some points I just went "nngh *whimper*", which is the best way that can happen to me during reading porn, it means I loved that. xD you should keep continue writing, this was pretty awesome, there wasn't any major OOC that I'd notice. what bothered me was you switching between how you called them, I dunno. I'm weird, but I prefer if you either call them by their stage names or real names. not both at once, you know? but that's just me.

ps: don't let us, Candy obsessed fangirl, limit you! write other pairings, we love them all. ^^

[thisisnotavirus]

Thank you so much :D I don't actually want to write loads in this fandom though, because I'll turn into a total fan girl and that's never a good thing lol!

Yeah, I agree tbh, I just wasn't too sure about what I should be calling them and I wanted a little variation. I'll keep that in mind if I ever write candy again :)

I might do, I wanted Whip/Skinny tbh, but the candy fics drew me in!!! if I fan girl enough, I will write more and of other pairings xD

But thanks for your kind words :)

Love & bubbles
- sian x

[niela_xxx]

Pshh, beinga fangirl is cool. ^^ *is one too* >.>

Whip/Skinny would be awesome! :D

[thisisnotavirus]

Hehe, STOP IT, YOU'RE GONNA MAKE ME WRITE IT!!!!!

[egoemopunk]

CANDY PORN! :D :D :D :D :D
just the thing a girl need to be happy <3
just one thing, you spelled Andreas' name a bit wrong, it should be AndY not AndI. sorry, it just disturbed me, a little >_> And i agree with Niela_xxx, the change of being either Cat, or Eric, and Andreas, or Whip/Whiplasher, distrubed me too >_> And Skinny don't go by the name Jonas anymore, not since five years (i think) back :P

otherwise i liked it! there wasn't too much OOC, but write more and you'll get into their carachter ^^
i really liked this, Candy porn is just nnnngh!<3

hope you write more :D

[thisisnotavirus]

Ahhh, sorry! There's an Andreas in the other fandom I write for and he get's nick named 'Andi'. I won't do it again, sorry!

Yeah, like I said, I just wasn't sure what to do... I've never wrote deathstars fan fic before, in fact I only started reading it on tuesday lol xD

Right, I'll keep that in mind xD what does he get called then?

Thank you for your comment, I realy appreciate it ^-^

Love and bubbles
- sian x

[egoemopunk]

Aaah, then it's accepted ^^ doesn't change the fact that i adore the story though :p

lmao, if not starting with reading so long ago, you managed with the carachters damn good! and the story too! nnngh<3

Skinny is called just Skinny :p it stands on his pass port and all that ^^ Andy have the name Whiplasher as a middle name, and I think Emil have changed his middle name into Nightmare too xD

*is too much of fangirl*

[thisisnotavirus]

Woahhhh, that's quite cool :D I bet they get funny looks when they go through airports lol xD

Yeah, I saw them on Monday night, and made a mental note to look for ff. I couldn't sleep the other night so I decided I'd write instead. I've wrote loads of fan fiction before, only about Tokio Hotel instead so *shrugs*

Phwoarrrr. Deathstars is a nice change though. Om nom nom xD I might try a chaptered fic next, rather than just porn lol

Love & bubbles
- sian x

[fruityahren]

Gah. *whimpers*

Unvelievably hot. Seriously. You should definately write more Deathstars fic. Who cares if you become a complete fangirl? I certainly won't. I used to write other fandoms, you know? lol.

I felt kinda bad for Cat because he was so drunk and it was somewhat premeditated on Whip's behalf, but still... it was so excellent.

The way they got their clothes off and crawled into bed - you deserve my first born.

[thisisnotavirus]

Chiiii ^-^thanks :3 god, this site doesn't help obsessions does it?

Yeah, I might write a sequel... Develope the relationship a little. Write a little fluff into it because the fluff monster controls my life xD

Hahahahahah xD that's brilliant!!! And I'm holding you to that. I'm going to call it Gunther, keep it in a cage and feed it ice cubes :)

Love & bubbles
- sian x

[fruityahren]

Ice Cubes? You can't freeze vodka, you know? And any child of mine will need to consume a significant amount of vodka.

The fluff monster controls your life? Thats funny, the kinky smut monster controls mine. Together we could write a super strain of story. HAHAHAHAHAH

This site gives/nurtures/chains you to obsessions. Welcome to heaven, darling.

[thisisnotavirus]

Lol! Maybe I'll just eat it instead >:3

Well, to be precise, it's the fluffy, slash killing monster of porn :) what more could we possibly want! xD haha, we shall join forces and rule the world!!!!

Yes, it really does -.- dumb fan fiction, ruins (and feeds) my life!

Hehe

[thisisnotavirus]

Chiiiiii ^-^

Thank you :D
I prefere the drunk!cat I had in mind but *shrugs*

Drunk!band = sex so I'm happy regardless :3