worthless words you waste on me

Aug 06, 2012 03:07

worthless words you waste on me
kaisoo (jongin/kyungsoo).
pg.
au. romance. slight!fluff.
oneshot/~2500w.

In a world where words are counted and limited, Kyungsoo uses his on songs while Jongin keeps quiet in fear of wasting them.

in a blurred mass, you stick out. )

fandom: exo, pairing: kai/kyungsoo, length: oneshot, genre: au, genre: romance

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thisismylastlie August 8 2012, 00:19:58 UTC
spot for littleprincecap for being amazing, as always, and putting up with me and my writing.

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littleprincecap August 9 2012, 00:32:35 UTC
YES MY SPOT
i call a spot in all of your fics now okay? okay
okay

AAHHHH THERE IS NOTHING TO PUT UP WITH. It's more like, omg Amy thank you for gracing us with your wonderful words and letting me see them before the rest of the world does

but thank you for calling me amazing i am not amazing but i like to hear that i'm amazing especially when amazing people call me amazing

...omg sorry I keep getting more incoherent but as I type we're talking about quark innuendos on twitter okay XD

SO, mainly I just really love how you developed Kai in this fic and made him really grow so much and come out of his shell, all because he was inspired by Kyungsoo. And Soo starts off so strong in the beginning, but then he falters and Jongin struggles harder than Soo ever did just so he could get Soo back to him.

/SOB SOB SOB

And you're wonderful for writing non-angsty Kaisoo <3 ( ... )

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thisismylastlie August 9 2012, 01:12:38 UTC
LOL BUT OF COURSE!

I dunno how to reply to your comment because it's so nice and I'm so bad with replying but thank you so much for liking my words ;_; it means a lot.

THANK YOU ♥

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littleprincecap August 9 2012, 01:30:02 UTC
YAY
i will go and put a spot in my fics too XD
EXCEPT EVERYTHING'S SO SPLIT BETWEEN LJ AND AFF NOW it's confusing on my brain

Don't worry about it! I totally understand. XD I suck at replying to comments. No but seriously Amy, your writing has just been getting better with every thing you've been writing; like this one is AMAZING and I have no idea why you hated it at first. D=

<3

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thisismylastlie August 8 2012, 00:20:35 UTC
spot for my twin (rhewoon) even though you read this raw lol so I dunno if you'll come back.
but you still have a spot :)

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rhewoon August 8 2012, 02:10:32 UTC
why wouldn't I come back? D: it's such a lovely fic /sobs.

oh and kyungsoo is a dominant bottom here and you know how I feel about that /sobs more.

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thisismylastlie August 8 2012, 05:40:04 UTC
lovely. fic. mine. lol

LOL yes, I know how you feel about that :) I always do that OTL by accident. because I set it kind of focused on kyungsoo. because he's my bao bei. and I'm biased. and yeah. /cries.

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rhewoon August 8 2012, 06:59:45 UTC
lovely. fic. yours. yes.

kyungsoo is my favorite dominant bottom. after tao. and donghae. and luhan. but then kyungsoo. ha.

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bobathon4 August 8 2012, 00:39:25 UTC
bless you for writing lovely kaisoo fluff ^_^

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thisismylastlie August 8 2012, 00:40:15 UTC
bless you for being such a sweetheart :)
thanks for reading~

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ribbonsong August 8 2012, 04:02:23 UTC
I have a real soft spot for that poem, and I always enjoy finding fics that twist the setting of that wordless world into something more. This is a really sweet story, a nice blend of longing, affection, and hope. I loved the way you had Jongin dance because he's too scared to speak, not just because he loves to dance, it makes his desires seem so much more realistic and human. Your characters have heart, and despite the restraints of the world they're in, they still seek out what happiness they can. Kyungsoo is sweetie, omg, I felt for him when he ran after his voice cracked. He was already putting himself on the spot, he was almost like the people's voice, and the fact that his voice suddenly cracked must have made it seem like "oh see this is what happens when you 'waste' words, there's no point". The kaisoo was adorable by the way. :)

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thisismylastlie August 8 2012, 05:17:36 UTC
isn't that poem amazing? :') I remember first reading it on tumblr, and I was just like, "ugh. this is beautiful. so many feels." lol and I thought the setting of it was so fascinating, too.
I love your analysis of my story ;_; I'm so touched by it.
thank you so much for reading!

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choamma August 8 2012, 04:10:58 UTC
even simple words like 'hi' can mean so much if you're saying it to the person you love.

oh. you got me.

jongin is really in love with kyungsoo and thank God he loves him back >.<
great! *thumbs up* :D my kaisoo feels~

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thisismylastlie August 8 2012, 05:16:19 UTC
aww, thank you so much for reading :)

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