Woahh.....that was intense. No clue what you were listening to that inspired it, but it was good. I'm kinda unclear on what happened at the end, though. Did Kid escape? What happened to the crows? What happened to Hakuba?
You do that very well you know, definitely need to know what happens next. This is great, I really am enjoying your writing, even though I honestly have no idea how I found your page.
Mystery of late night browsing. Or extremely early morning browsing.
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The end is exactly as I intended it, so I'm glad to hear it worked. The next part (when I write it) should clear up some of that confusion. ^^
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Mystery of late night browsing. Or extremely early morning browsing.
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I'm glad your'e enjoying my works ^^
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