Themes 12 and 25 - Shika/Tema/Yuya

Feb 17, 2006 13:16

Two more themes, following directly after the Origins Story, I'm sorry there isn't much Temari in these stories, she has a greater role in the ones that are forthcoming, just wanted to post these so I don't keep people impatient and then give you a ton to read at once.

Please enjoy 12 - Alone and 25 - Looking

Theme: 12 - Alone
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theme 12, shikamaru/temari/tayuya, naruto, theme 25, lady_zip

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monoshiri February 17 2006, 23:47:04 UTC
I dunno about Kishi-sensei accepting souls as a royalty payment, but you've certainly got the ownership papers on mine.

The second one is love, lovelovelove, and not only have you nailed both Shika and 'yuya, but you gave me hysterics with the mental image of Shika wandering out of Temari's bedroom in his drawers only to run right into her (scary as hell) little brothers. Betcha he had to talk pretty damn fast to keep Gaara from eating him. ^__^

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sparklemagpie February 18 2006, 02:08:18 UTC
Talk, run, placate with excuses about laundry... >_>

Yeah, poor Shika XD

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed! ^^

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monoshiri February 18 2006, 02:15:52 UTC
"Well, the laundry explains the lack of clothes," Kankuro said in a would-be mild voice, "but not the boner. What's the terminology for 'fixing' a deer?"

I'm really looking forward to seeing how this turns threesome. ^__^

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sparklemagpie February 18 2006, 02:17:12 UTC
HAH! OMFG LOVE KANKURO! *DIES OF LAUGHING AND LOVES FOR YOU*

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spork_ai February 18 2006, 00:40:12 UTC
She conquers me and I come back for more.

Awesome ending line! it sounds kinky to me... XD

You're going on my mental list of people on the internet that I think are teh awesome *nods*. I think you've got a really good grasp on everyone's characters, and the way you're developing the story is very realistic and believable. I really enjoy the interactions between Shikamaru and Tayuya too ^_^

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sparklemagpie February 18 2006, 02:09:42 UTC
*blush, happy* Thank you so much! ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying reading this stuff and that my plot doesn't sound hokey. ^^;;;

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____ero__sennin February 18 2006, 04:47:03 UTC
*cheers for the Kabuto-cameo, even though he's an evil, evil bastard*

Your Shikamaru is love. And I don't envy him having Gaara as a brother in law at all. Sheesh, and I thought meeting my girlfriend's family would be frightening...now it seems like a breeze next to "Crazy Sociopathic Sand Demon".

Also, Tayuya? Very nice. *huggles the sad, nearly assassinated girl*

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sparklemagpie February 18 2006, 05:03:41 UTC
*huggles Tayuya too* Tayuya is rife with angst, it's awesome to write. She's so good at angry and defeated - all tension and dissapointment. Delicious.

And yeah, evil bastard Kabuto is joy. ^^

Dammit, I have to do themes on the inlaws now. XD

Poor Tayuya, no parents to bring to the table. Maybe she'll just invite Sakon and Ukon to dinner some night. XD

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____ero__sennin February 18 2006, 05:09:39 UTC
Angst can be wonderful, yes. That's why I have a Hyuuga sandwich =D It's filled with creamy angsty goodness. And I'm mixing food metaphors now. REGARDLESS!

Kabuto is evil, sneaky love.

You must! Yes!

I dunno how well those two would get along with Kankurou, though. Seeing as he almost killed them. Though, that just makes it better, doesn't it?

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sparklemagpie February 18 2006, 05:36:51 UTC
EXCUSE FOR AWKWARD DINNER SCENE! HEE HEE HEE!

I was plotting on having the trio's kids eventually break the tension between Kankuro and Sakon I think.

Tayuya and Shika's little one runs up with a sock with googly eyes on her hand while Kankuro and Sakon are STARING at each other across the kitchen table, and she just starts grabbing Sakon's arm repeatedly.

"Haruko honey...?"
"THE PUPPET IS EATING YOU!"
*SNORKDIE*

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trendy_rocker February 27 2006, 00:38:31 UTC
You. Are. Amazing. *loves you*

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sparklemagpie February 27 2006, 02:39:04 UTC
*BLUSH* Heh, thank you. ^__^ Glad you're enjoying these.

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