Comments | thirstyrobot: Jeeves/Wooster Dictionary Fraglets: 3-4/20

thirstyrobot

Jeeves/Wooster Dictionary Fraglets: 3-4/20

Apr 01, 2009 09:39

4. In which an unnamed narrator pokes fun at the romance genre: ( Careful )

Comments 35

pipariperho April 1 2009, 16:34:58 UTC

You very nearly scared me with the second one. I thought there would not be a happy ending, but I'm glad you proved me wrong. Liked the narrating-style too. The first one is something I would love to read from Jeeves' POV too. The little things here and there are lovely.

thirstyrobot April 1 2009, 18:58:38 UTC

Aw, I wouldn't have done something like that without some kind of warning! Glad you liked, thanks!

random_nexus April 1 2009, 17:19:25 UTC

Absolute marvelosity! The first one was so bittersweet! Oh, my heart! And yes, I too thought the second was going to end in tears of woe. Bless your buttons for not going there, but you did a spiffy job of teasing!

Wonderfully done! I'm very much looking forward to more!

thirstyrobot April 1 2009, 19:11:29 UTC

Thanks! Sorry about causing your heart any undue strain. ;) I don't think I'd write a tears-of-woe ending without some kind of warning, though it was meant to be a tease.

random_nexus April 1 2009, 19:35:58 UTC

Oh, tease it was, indeed! I'm just a worry-wart! *grin*
You did wonderfully!

mxdp April 1 2009, 17:30:26 UTC

*bows for the lord and master* MY GOD YOU SCARED THE HELL OUT OF ME WITH THE LAST ONE! And I loved it. You can feel Jeeves panic/relief. And the drugged ending is sweeeet ♥

The first one was absolutely wonderful as well. True, they could have met! &hears; And I'm sure Jeeves remembers, and I hope one day they'll risk their foolish pride, and talk about it. :)

thirstyrobot April 1 2009, 19:31:04 UTC

Jeez, I should start handing round aspirin for all the heart attacks I'm giving people! But it sounds like it was a good kind of heart attack, right? ;)

I'm sure Jeeves remembers, and I hope one day they'll risk their foolish pride, and talk about it.
Oh, indubitably. Maybe not in the course of these 20, but who knows.

Thanks for reading!

hazeltea April 1 2009, 18:55:49 UTC

Wonderful suspense. The first one os so sadly sweet.

thirstyrobot April 1 2009, 19:35:05 UTC

Thank you! I think what with all the OMGCUTE yesterday I had to de-fluff.

storyfan April 1 2009, 19:37:51 UTC

And you do have more of these coming, right? I especially liked the first one. A bit wistful, that.

thirstyrobot April 1 2009, 22:35:00 UTC

Thanks! And I do indeed. There may only be one tomorrow as I haven't the faintest idea what to do with octosyllabic, but i'm going to keep banging away at them till I've got through all 20.