Comments | thirstyrobot: [Nathan Barley] Roadtrip fic: You Get the Last Word

thirstyrobot

[Nathan Barley] Roadtrip fic: You Get the Last Word

Sep 11, 2010 17:59

Title: You Get the Last Word
Pairing: Dan/Jones
Rating: PG-13
Words: ~2000
Summary: And they saunter vaguely back towards real life.
Notes: Thanks to the_reverand for looking over this! Any fail is all mine.
Takes place directly after One Day We'll Look Back And... Masterlist for this universe is hereOh! And the thing that gets bought in the shop is courtesy ( Read more... )

roadtripverse, nathan barley, fic

Comments 33

the_reverand September 11 2010, 23:20:57 UTC

You know I love it but at that risk of repeating myself and for the sake of having it all together...

"I'm not bothered, Oxford English. Cock poems."

I could rean them going back and forth forever. ^__^

If anyone notices two wet handprints on Jones's arse or the fingernail marks on the back of Dan's neck, they wait until after the door's closed behind them to remark on it.

WET HANDPRINTS ON BUM!! <3

I love the shop bit and all the stuf and Jones being so thrilled over it and Dan being thrilled Jones is thrilled and... His hands find their way to Jones's hips by rote, nearly frightening in the way they fit there. In the way everything fits everywhere.

After Dan's started the car but before he's put it in gear, Jones leans across and kisses him, deep and sweet with teeth worrying at Dan's lower lip and fingers curling into his hair. "Thank you," he says softly, and Dan doesn't drive far before he pulls the car into a layby hidden from the road by trees where they end up lying on the rough gravel with lime marking their clothes ( ... )

thirstyrobot September 11 2010, 23:41:52 UTC

Thank youuuuu <33333

I do appreciate having all the love collected up! :D

And the love in general. And thunderstorm cocks. XD I imagine hilarious outtakes with Dan swearing and smoking and wadding up paper as he tries to write a sonnet. :P

mandybling September 12 2010, 01:22:36 UTC

Lovely!

thirstyrobot September 12 2010, 01:26:20 UTC

Thanks! :)

turgid_prose September 12 2010, 01:35:25 UTC

That was super duper!

Big Star! Eeep!

thirstyrobot September 12 2010, 03:28:10 UTC

Thank you!

Yay Big Star love!! :D

bookends999 September 12 2010, 02:49:54 UTC

*breathes out* Oh my god. "maybe I'm your groupie" The little heart on the filter.

Perfect. Just perfect. I want Jones to love me :)

thirstyrobot September 12 2010, 03:29:05 UTC

Ahhhhhh don't we all, oh man!

Thanks for reading! <3

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thirstyrobot September 12 2010, 21:45:19 UTC

Aww it's a perfectly good response, thank you! :D That video cracks me the hell up every time. I think it's the keyboard player pulling faces and all "look ma, no hands." XD