Fic: The Last First Time (Dean/Castiel)

Jul 18, 2012 17:55

Title: The Last First Time
Author: thinlizzy2
Artist: mizz_destiny
Beta(s): Big thanks to both L and T
Pairing(s): Dean/Castiel
Rating: R
Word count: 7535
Genres/Kinks/Etc: Time-travel, AR
Warnings: Character death, torture, implied future consent-issues, violence, blood

Summary: Castiel as God travels back in time trying to prevent the horrors he knows he will ( Read more... )

fic, spn, fest

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dachinchilla July 20 2012, 07:32:24 UTC
ABSOLUTELY SMASHING.

I love how it starts out with smaller choices and changes, but grows progressively bigger and heavier and out of control until Castiel's pretty much collapsing in on himself. This was such a fascinating read, thank you.

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thinlizzy2 July 23 2012, 04:31:23 UTC
Thanks so much! I tried to get the structure to parallel 7.01, with events becoming bigger and bloodier as it went. I'm so glad that came across.

Your icon is so funny!

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dark_austral July 21 2012, 04:18:16 UTC
thinlizzy2 July 23 2012, 04:34:09 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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rockstarpeach July 21 2012, 20:47:20 UTC
This was so interesting and original and absolutely heartbreaking! Poor Cas, trying and trying to fix things...

Just gorgeous.

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thinlizzy2 July 23 2012, 04:34:36 UTC
Cheers! And thanks so much for reading and reviewing - much appreciated!

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margi_lynn July 23 2012, 21:52:27 UTC
Oh yikes Cas! This was lovely writing, darling, even if I ended up reading this peeking between my fingers.

Thank you for sharing ♥

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thinlizzy2 July 24 2012, 04:19:08 UTC
LOL - I can just picture you reading with your hand splayed over your face!

Thank you so much for the kind words m'dear!

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ediblewolfpeach July 24 2012, 00:25:31 UTC
Son of a bitch, this is brilliant. You can see everything spiraling downwards more and more every time Castiel tries to fix things. All the resulting realities were fascinating and unique. This is definitely going to be a story I re-read many times.

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ediblewolfpeach July 24 2012, 00:29:51 UTC
Also, if it'd be somehow possible to made a pdf version that would keep the images intact that'd be perfect. It would make a nice on-the-go read.

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thinlizzy2 July 24 2012, 04:20:28 UTC
Thank you so much; I'm so glad you liked it! As for making a PDF, I'm painfully low-tech, but I'll ask my flist how it's done and get back to you. There are some techie people on it, so they'll know!

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thinlizzy2 July 30 2012, 11:34:07 UTC
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that someone is going to make that PDF. If you PM me with your email address, I'll send it to you once I get it from them.

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