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[thinkatory]

Title: In Time
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairing: Meredith Grey, Derek Shepherd; Meredith/Derek.
Rating: A median between PG and PG-13.
Word count: 1428
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. (Shonda Rimes, Shondaland, ABC, et al.) The original characters and plot are

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[dramaturgy]

He's grinning now and all you can do is imagine him naked when he gives you that grin.

Me too.

You exchange a serious, competitive look with Derek, and then both of you dive for it at the same time.

The mental image is so LOVELY because I can see those looks clearly and then I can imagine them landing in a heap in the puddle. And wet McDreamy, mmm.

(I need a McDreamy to rescue me when I'm locked out. I would arrange for it to happen more often.)

[misunderstood_b]

This is lovely! Actually freaking gorgeous.

[skye3]

that was excellent! this is your frist time writing merder fics, you say? well, you should start writing more! seriously! this is perfect! i love it. love. love.

[As you step inside and turn around to look at him, he's looking at you with that serious, admiring look and you put your hands on your hips.

"What?" you demand again.

"Meredith," he says in this way that just says it all -- exasperation, amazement, contentment -- and you soften, feeling like a sixteen year old or something. He can always do that to you.] -- i can totally see EP and PD doing this scene. very nice!

hope to read more from you soon! cheers!

[hideseekkeep]

Good grief, this melted my heart. :)

The phone conversation at the beginning and the exchange of the "I love you"s was brilliant. You captured their chemistry so well.

I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you'll continue to write some more MerDer in the future.

[lil_orli]

oh that was so great you've got meredith so well that last line i can hear her saying it heh