Oh wow. That was a great turnaround in the last paragraph, with Peter's motivations becoming clear. He really manipulates Nathan masterfully, making this be not just a kink vignette, but a kink vignette with character development. I love it when authors sneak character development into sex scenes, that always wins.
I probably shouldn't read these kind of things in the library ;)
Any kind of kink seems to work for these too, but you really did this well - the descriptions are so lush and sensual and powerful, I feel sort of twisted up and out and tense and buzzing, and the last paragraph really did me in. Oh, Peter. So very like him, and so sad that he feels he has to resort to this - and probably has to - and yet so beautiful that at least Nathan can genuinely give him this, Peter that vulnerable and Nathan so close to him in this that his barriers kind of have to break down for Peter.
Beautiful. Beautiful, hot, and kind of heartbreaking, but mostly beautiful.
Libray pr0n ftw! :D I'm glad you liked it - I wrote it for the porn battle, hence the shortness. I'm going to have to write something longer in the future.
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Any kind of kink seems to work for these too, but you really did this well - the descriptions are so lush and sensual and powerful, I feel sort of twisted up and out and tense and buzzing, and the last paragraph really did me in. Oh, Peter. So very like him, and so sad that he feels he has to resort to this - and probably has to - and yet so beautiful that at least Nathan can genuinely give him this, Peter that vulnerable and Nathan so close to him in this that his barriers kind of have to break down for Peter.
Beautiful. Beautiful, hot, and kind of heartbreaking, but mostly beautiful.
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