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"He Belongs to the Storm"

Jan 11, 2008 10:35

Title: "He Belongs to the Storm"
Author: Stormswift
Rating: PG-13, consensual incest
Word Count: 1,088
Disclaimer: Not mine, just borrowing.
Author's Note: Rain is one of my big turn-ons. I couldn't not write fic once that prompt came up! Beta'd by the fabulous and irreplaceable
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day 36, author: stormswift

Comments 16

therandomgirlie January 11 2008, 20:31:55 UTC

Waaa!
*flails*
so utterly gorgeous and perfect - how did you know it rained constantly all day today where I live?
*runs off to re-read and add to mems*

stormswift January 12 2008, 04:39:18 UTC

Rain doesn't seem quite so bad when you imagine that two hot brothers are making out somewhere, right?

...well, I'll add THAT to sentences I never thought I'd say, but at any rate, thanks for reading and for your wonderful comments!

meli_64 January 11 2008, 21:23:34 UTC

Great! Perfect description of Peter as the rain. :D

lillyankh January 11 2008, 22:17:04 UTC

ohhhhhhhhhmyyyyyyyyyyygoooooooooooooood this was so BEAUTIFUL!

I loved it so much. The imagery was perfect.

His fingers finally found purchase and-rougher than he meant to-he pulled his brother to him, wishing and willing that they could meld together and be one, as he knew they were somehow meant to be.

That was so gorgeous it made my heart ache. Congratulations on an excellent fic.

stormswift January 12 2008, 04:49:39 UTC

Thanks for reading and I'm so glad this fic was well-received - I'm still slightly new to fandom and this pairing, so I'm really glad that everyone likes it so much!

ozwich January 11 2008, 22:25:03 UTC

but every time Peter's hand strayed during press conferences, these rare solitary walks, hell, sometimes family dinners, yelling was sure to follow behind closed doors.

and there hops another plot bunny.

I loved this - what a great start to the day. Wet incestuous brothers mmmmmmmmmmmmm . . .

ibonekoen January 13 2008, 08:41:14 UTC

Kisses in the rain are always so incredibly hot, but this one was brilliantly beautiful. Well done. :D

stormswift January 13 2008, 15:10:08 UTC

Speaking of, that icon of yours? I just picked myself up off the floor, kthx.

Thanks for your comment!

ibonekoen January 13 2008, 18:44:53 UTC

Isn't that awesome? I found it in one of the graphics comms and had to have it 'cause Peter and Sylar are my OTP. Sigh.

You're welcome!