Comments | theyreitalian: Day 11

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Day 11

Dec 17, 2007 16:48

Title: Wishes Are For Children
Pairing: Nathan/Peter
Rating: Adult
Prompt: Day 11 for theyreitalian
Words: 269
Disclaimer: Heroes belongs to Tim Kring, NBC, and other folks who aren’t me. This is for fun only, never profit.
( Wishes Are For Children )

day 11, author: oh_mcgee

Comments 19

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oh_mcgee December 17 2007, 23:19:56 UTC

I'm sorry. I'm caught in the angst trap and I can't get out. :(

fabrisse December 17 2007, 22:55:48 UTC

Darkness can be good. *G*

Damn Nathan's amnesia!

oh_mcgee December 18 2007, 20:01:55 UTC

Darkness can most definitely be good. And yummy.

bigfiction December 17 2007, 23:06:49 UTC

Sad, dark, and still hot. Nathan being a drunken ass!! Peter needing another drink. As per usual, last sentence FTW.

*PUNCHES YOU IN THE FACE*

oh_mcgee December 18 2007, 20:02:48 UTC

Bring it. I can take it. ;D

blueluthien December 17 2007, 23:10:24 UTC

LOVE IT!

oh_mcgee December 18 2007, 20:05:18 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad!

ex_rosegany December 18 2007, 03:09:53 UTC

There's so many things I love about this, let's just say I quoted it all. But seriously, beautiful work - this has such a captivating rhythm to it, very tight and lyrical, and my heart aches for poor, pretty Peter...

The wish idea throughout works so well, and the image of Mama Petrelli a young Peter that wishes were for children, well...Broke my heart again, didn't you? ;) But such a perfect, believable memory, and oh, Pete...

*hugs you both*

oh_mcgee December 18 2007, 20:07:49 UTC

*hugs you back* Thank you sweetness, for such lovely comments always. ♥