Nice Car

[thexyboombang]

*REDFLAG*
Consider this your warning. Because this is -not- PtT, y'all. J/W, AU, NC-17.
Still with me?

Comments

[captain_molly]

Hot hot hot, FUCK hot.
God DAMN, i didn't know that was going to be so hot. Ooo it's good. So good. YUM. Memorized.

[meletor_et_al]

*blink* ...Wanna know something? Neither did I. Glad you approve, though.

[veronica_rich]

Is the song "Desert Rose" by chance?

And ... wow. DAMN. I am a slut for a great AU J/W fic, especially modern-day, and ... hell, it's nighttime and I'm feeling heated up in spite of the chill outside ...

*fans self*

[meletor_et_al]

Um... umumum... y'know, could be. It's on one of my sister's burned mixes, along with some crazy Romanian techno, Finnish heavy metal, and Eiffel 65 in Italian. ...But come to think of it, it very well could be. Probably is. .::edits::. Thanks.

...Well, I'm glad I could warm you up... *snerk* Honestly, I didn't expect to write this. It just... happened. So wierd.

Thanks much!

[metalkatt]

Yum. Positively delicious--I think I'll add this one to my Memories section for easy recall later on. Very, very nice.

[meletor_et_al]

Thanks kindly. Like I keep saying, this was a -very- different thing for me to write, and it's a happy surprise that people actually like it.

[metalkatt]

Well, let me think here... Jack as a randy, biker-style car thief... Will as the not-so-dumb and hot as hell gas station attendant who takes extreme liberties with the back of a cherry-red convertible... What's not to like?

I caught a few spelling and punctuation erros, but not many, and certainly not enough to draw away from the innate heat of this fic. Will's right: "Hot is hot is HOT."

[meletor_et_al]

...Well, I wasn't sure! Though you do make a very fine argument.

Errors? Do tell, please! *obsessivecompulsiveperfectionistmode* ...only if you can remember them. Otherwise, don't sweat it.

Thanks again!

[sinister_beauty]

I don't even like Will/Jack, and this was very hot. Wow. My favorite bit was the tiniest of details, where Jack shoves his hands in Will's pockets. So realistic and sexy.

[meletor_et_al]

Wow, thanks. Thank you very much. ...I'm not generally a Will/Jack shipper myself, but somehow the pairing lends itself better to random supercharged sex.

[tseek_unique]

I am now moving to South Dakota! This is really eye opening J/W at it's modern best. Huzzah for that English class! Flows like silk. And this bit: His shirt was one button too loose, and his jeans one size too tight. That Will! He really needs a good spanking from Jack. *fans self*

[meletor_et_al]

I figured South Dakota needed -something- exciting... XP. Thanks so much; I'm glad you liked it. And if AP English class isn't good for writing, what is it good for? (Oh yeah, preparing for the AP test... well whatever.)

Thanks for reading!!