[fanfic-APH] Much Ado About Body Language

[coconabanana]

Writing gay porn shouldn’t be this difficult, damnit!

Title:: Much Ado About Body Language [FF.net Link]
Fandom:: Axis Powers Hetalia
Character(s)/Pairing(s):: Arthur Kirkland (England)/Alfred F. Jones (America), in that order.
Rating:: NC17.
Warning:: sex, sap, strange writing. There.
Beta’d by:: my partner in sin and crime; chocobo_ed, and yes, I do

Comments

[finite_farfalla]

I think it's not fail. &hearts You should have more confidence in your skill. :)
It's, in fact, very hot, and shows sadistic seme-Arthur is as valid as tsundere uke-Arthur. lol

The last gesture, lesse.... uhm, "my heart is yours?", lol, or perhaps, "I love you and no word could describe it?"

[coconabanana]

Orz, really? Then I am glad that you think so. It's not that I have no confidence in my skill, it's just that I know I can write better than this. That, and my ridiculously high standard. -brick'd-

Tehe, thanks!

Ah, I shall give you my answer for your guess on Y!M. ;D

[whenyoufalldown]

That was not fail at all! It was incredibly hot yet adorable at the same time and ashdjkhsa England doesn't get to top enough ♥

Does the last gesture mean "I dare you to rip out your heart and eat it"? lolol okay I'm just being stupid, I bet it's something cheesy like "I love you" or "My heart is yours" IDK xD

[coconabanana]

I'm happy that you though soooo! ;3;/

Hehe, well, one of your guesses is right. ;D

[kotakia]

It was certainly not fail! It was great! I love all the body language in it, with every gesture just showing how much they care in ways. Thank you so much for writing it!~ Really made my Christmas Eve already~

[coconabanana]

I am very much glad that you liked it, really! ;3;/ I was practically crying because I couldn't come up with anything niftier. -sob- Hope you had a fun Christmas and will have a happy New Year!

[revoiment_hika]

*covers eyes
idon'treadanythingidon'treadanythingidon'treadanything

uh umm.... okay, I read it. And I'm really sure it's no fail at all. Well, I manage only trough halfway though. I'm sorry! I just can't >///<

b--but akdhajdad seme!Iggy is just too hawt and we need more of that side of him ;D

crap my mom staring at me for blushing all over

[coconabanana]

....otl, I told you, it's better if you didn't read it. Not only you're still underage, you eyes would've been saved from this thing. XD;;

[revoiment_hika]

it's hard to avert your gaze from this fic once you read it XD

[coconabanana]

Because he's the British Empire~ XD;;

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment~ <3