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[aph] 4 Minutes

Oct 25, 2009 20:34

Title:: 4 Minutes [FF.Net link]
Fandom:: Axis Powers Hetalia
Character(s)/Pairing(s):: America/England and a soon to be exploding bomb in the middle, no pun intended there.
Rating:: R15…almost NC17 but, whichever…
Warning:: it’s long for a supposedly quick fic, no real plot whatsoever a.k.a. PWP, and shagging (borderline sex) I…cannot write real sex ( Read more... )

series: axis powers hetalia, status: oneshot, aph: alfred f. jones (america), aph: arthur kirkland (england), !4 minutes, rating: r-15, pairing: america/england

Comments 39

susan_chan October 26 2009, 16:03:11 UTC

i loved it!! XD
it was hooot! XD
just like in an american action moovie..in the last minute the time stops:D

coconabanana October 26 2009, 16:05:17 UTC

Ahahaha. Thanks! I'm glad that you love it. X3
Thank you for the comment!

bittergreentea October 26 2009, 16:20:59 UTC

THIS. O__O

Excuse me while I try to digest the awesomeness that I just read.

...

Right. I loved every second of that. The tension, the pacing, the near smut - just everything. Gah!

This random lurker votes yes to the omake! :D

coconabanana October 26 2009, 16:37:34 UTC

XDv.
The pace was supposed to be quicker (and shorter in length) but it seems like my brain loves to get into details. OTL
Near smut because Icannotwriterealsexjustyet. XD;; I need more practice.

Fufufu.Omake, huh. 8DDD
Thank you for the comment!

ithronluin October 26 2009, 16:21:53 UTC

......it's so alfred to go all drama right before the bomb explodes, omg. It's definitely worth reading this.

<3

coconabanana October 26 2009, 16:44:44 UTC

He's just one big drama king, isn't he? XDD
I'm glad you think so. Thank you for reading!

blulious October 26 2009, 16:35:42 UTC

I read this on fanfic.net and SOOOO wished you would put this on the community for sharing purposes.

GOSH THIS IS BEYOND HAWT!!

coconabanana October 26 2009, 16:41:02 UTC

Yesterday my internet hated me (still is DX), and I couldn't share it to the comm until today. 8D
Thank you for the comment! <3

blulious October 26 2009, 18:38:35 UTC

Also, I second the request for an omake. The end was left vague, which makes it all the more exciting (like "time finally stopped for their life" or "the time on the bomb stopped"? OH THE POSSIBLITY!!)

But if they are alive, I request they find a room ASAP and finish the job. >8[

*yes, I'm evil.*

Thanks for listening. <33

coconabanana October 27 2009, 08:36:02 UTC

Sure thing! -goes to brainstorming-

Ufufufu~ Well, I bet everyone wants to see them finish the job. That's if they're alive. XDD

You're welcome!

michikixthien October 26 2009, 17:11:36 UTC

OMAKEEEEE I´LL BEG FOR THIS ON MY BLOODY KNEES Q___Q
*clings to you*

this fic was sou awesome and so is your writing style ;D *g*

coconabanana October 27 2009, 08:38:16 UTC

Now, now, please get up and wait patiently for the omake, kay? *pats pats* XDD

Ahaha, thank you very much for the comment! <3