[fic] When the Snow Falls

[coconabanana]

Title: When the Snow falls
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Hibari Kyouya/Chrome Dokuro
Prompt(s): snowy Christmas with Hibari sharing long scarf with Chrome (without Chrome being bitten to death… XD. No, I’m just kidding)
Rating: PG for fail!fluffy 1896 (in which I never write fluff before)
Genre: Romance it turns out more Gen than Romance. Sorry for that m(_

Comments

[moonclown]

moonclown
2008-12-19 02:44 pm (local) (link)
o.
my.
GOD!!!!!!!

I swear i can't stop smiling!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!! THANK U SO MUCH!!!! U made Hibari soooooo cute!! XD XD XD <3333 *hugs Nana* Thank U SO MUCH!! Merry XMas!!

ok. i know i'm being hyper but it really doesn't seem enough... hahahahahahhaa XD XD XD

BTW: '“Take it. I don’t want you to die here and hence disrupting the discipline.”'

Priceless. So Hibari! ><

(ahahhaa... i wrote the comments agen XD)

[coconabanana]

Thank you! I never write present!Hibari before, because I'm in love with his TYL! version. I make him a little bit too cute in this drabs, which means he's OOC. T-T. But, because you guys like it, I think it's not a problem. Thank you for the comment anyway. 8D

[kim_tram]

that was so adorable >.<;;;

[coconabanana]

Really? XD. Adorableness and Hibari wasn't supossed to be in the same place. lol.
Thank you for reading and the comments. 8)

[kim_tram]

ahahaha, true true
but i guess when he's with chrome
he's adorable >.

[styts202]

Aww...Hibari and Chrome moments are so kawaii!! Awesome!

[coconabanana]

This drabble wasn't supposed to be cute! It supposed to be fluffy! DX. Augh! I fail as a writer! But, you all like it. ^le sigh^
Is it really that cute? And since you've read most of my fics, how do you find the writing style I used in this drabbles?

[styts202]

You are sooo NOT a failed writer!

I said that Hibari and Chrome are cute because I've always liked them as a pair together. :)

In Singapore, many of my friends use the word 'cute' to refer to many things, even if a certain thing isn't that cute but just something he/she likes or find unique or innocent. Oppsies. Don't mind that too much. :)

I really like your writing style and especially how you write from the POV of your characters.Serious!XD You can bring out any characters' personality pretty well. :)