Fic: Axial Age

Jan 25, 2008 20:51

Title: Axial Age
Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: PG
Genre: Gen
Summary: Jack's brief visit to a planet causes more trouble than usual. Unfortunately, there's no easy fix for this one.
Characters: Jack
Words: 539
Notes: Written for itinerant_vae's fic fest.

We must strive towards your example! )

torchwood, gen

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donutsweeper January 25 2008, 21:01:47 UTC
oooh- that's kind of eerie

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smithy161 January 25 2008, 21:04:54 UTC
I was aiming for funny but it... didn't want to go that way.

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donutsweeper January 25 2008, 21:06:49 UTC
there's a hint of humor to it, but not a lot. But I like it, I could really see it happening

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smithy161 January 25 2008, 21:07:43 UTC
Oh, I bet it's happened!

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fandom_me January 25 2008, 21:14:29 UTC
I kind of love this, a lot. The Shut UP is awesome, and I love this more than I can express

Handsome, brave, daring, blah, blah, blah. He was used to being loved and feared by the people whose lives he sprinted through.

Because yeah. That's Jack.

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smithy161 January 25 2008, 21:44:40 UTC
Awesome. Glad you like it! And yeah, Jack's a bit like the Doctor in the way he wanders through lives and vanishes again, leaving people scared and just a bit in love with him.

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unfeathered January 25 2008, 22:03:20 UTC
Oh, that's fantastic. Jack as a God. Hilarious. Wonderful. I love it!

Especially "Use my image, and I'll sue!" *g*

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smithy161 January 25 2008, 22:58:08 UTC
Yay, glad the funny worked! I had trouble trying to steer it in that direction, especially towards the end.

Glad you liked it!

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phoenix64 January 25 2008, 22:11:37 UTC
*sporfle* It had to happen sooner or later, and more than once I would imagine.

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smithy161 January 25 2008, 22:59:14 UTC
Oh, it definitely did!

Thanks for reading!

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karaokegal January 26 2008, 01:05:48 UTC
OH JACK! Who wouldn't want to worship him, really? I love it when he gets into things over his head.

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smithy161 January 28 2008, 23:04:15 UTC
I imagine he gets this a lot...

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