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Fic: Trust

Jan 10, 2008 23:36

Title: Trust
Rating: G
Pairing: Five/Turlough
Summary: Shortly after Enlightenment, the Doctor and Turlough go for a walk on a quiet alien world. Turlough wonders if they have anything they need to discuss, but the Doctor is far more interested in the scenery.
Length: 1,172 words
Notes: _medley_ asked for Five and Turlough and trust. Sorry about the ( Read more... )

five/turlough, doctor who

Comments 22

_medley_ January 11 2008, 00:18:58 UTC

Eeee! One of my favorite things in the universe is characters talking-without-talking, and I *adore* this. They've said all they need to say, right there, in between the tree frogs and the teasing. I always love the way you write Five, and Turlough's just perfect here, too.

Turlough could hardly believe he was for real.

Yes, *exactly.* And yet, hoping against hope that he is. ::pets them both::

Thank you TONS and TONS.

smithy161 January 11 2008, 00:32:33 UTC

You're welcome. Thank you for the prompt!

Really glad you like Turlough in this. I always worry a bit when writing a character for the first time.

Oh, and talky fics? I'm with you on that one.

_medley_ January 11 2008, 00:50:33 UTC

Oh, yeah, Turlough seems *just* right to me. He's not nearly as cynical as he thinks he is. *g*

finmagik January 11 2008, 00:42:17 UTC

That was really nice.

smithy161 January 11 2008, 17:59:53 UTC

Thanks!

kensieg January 11 2008, 00:47:42 UTC

wonderful fic! fluff is good.

smithy161 January 11 2008, 18:08:31 UTC

Thanks! And it is, sometimes, yes.

donutsweeper January 11 2008, 01:56:49 UTC

and the apparently famous wandering trees - although they seemed to be stationary for now.

*sporfle* warn a girl before a line like that!!!

LOVED IT!!!

smithy161 January 11 2008, 18:12:24 UTC

Yay, thank you!

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smithy161 January 11 2008, 18:13:19 UTC

*Calls an ambulance*

Your icon... *Fills in missing bits of scene using own dirty mind*