[Fanfic] Red Sky, Black Snow

Mar 19, 2010 12:59

Title: Red Sky, Black Snow
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Fire Nation, Northern Water Tribe
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: It had to happen sooner or later! The Siege of the North, Avartalia-style.

It's impossible, this feeling. Like the universe holding its breath )

avartalia, fanfic

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futuresoon March 19 2010, 16:31:41 UTC
:DDDDDDD Oh man, you did an awesome job of portraying the epicness of that battle without actually showing more than a very small part of it--and man, Lee is craaaazy. I still want the Water Tribes interacting with each other, though, get on that. :P < /demanding>

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thewaterbandit March 19 2010, 16:39:43 UTC
Lee is so crazy! But, well, killing a whole race of people will do that to you, JERK. I'm pleased that that came across, because writing nutty characters is very difficult (and over-egging it can be deceptively easy).

Hey, you don't think I'd write Kesuk and neglect his sister, do you? :p

(Thank yoooou)

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skelody March 20 2010, 00:33:58 UTC
The universe holding its breath -- I must say that was an image, a phrasing that I really liked. It makes sense, down in the bone.

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thewaterbandit March 20 2010, 09:38:09 UTC
Thank you! It was a late addition, but one worth keeping :D

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