HMD + Plot/Porn Proposals

[thewarisover]

Want porn plot? Want to drop a line? Wanna help me out with characterization? Feel free to drop a note here, and I'll try and get back to you as soon as possible! Make sure to put the purpose of your comment in the subject line so that I don't get confused!

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Comments

[karmauberalles]

Hey there! A while ago, a friend brought up some issues she had with Roy's characterization to me, and I agreed with her on the points and went to check for things to tell you that I thought were a little... off. The good news is, while I think you've had issues with these things in the past, I haven't noticed them at all in Roy's more recent posts. I'll bring them up anyway just to encourage you to keep it up.

I think Roy was a little too... bouncy, maybe? I felt that the occasional emoticons he used, the tildes, and the obfuscating easy-to-hack messages seemed a little... blatant. I think that you had Roy down then, just not the facade he presents. To everyone outside his men, Roy can come off as a somewhat flippant womanizer, but I think his attitude is... a little more serious than what was presented in the past, and it's a little more subtle. Again, I think recently you have improved there; I'm just saying that it's a path you should stick to

[thewarisover]

Thanks so much for the HMD! I seriously, seriously appreciate it, especially since this is my first time trying Roy out for myself.

Actually, the Easy to Hack messages were part of a plot I've got going with Itou at the moment. He's probably going to cut them now that he's confirmed what he needed to know (that Itou's sniffing around). |D

As for the followers, I'm trying to work on it, mostly by poking other muns and seeing if they're game for some plotting. I've got a lot of time to work through this, so here's hoping I get somewhere.

I'll take your offer up in the future, I'm sure. In the meantime, thanks again!