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thevinegarworks

Fic: We Won't Pass This Way Again (so kiss me with your mouth open)

Feb 08, 2010 21:18

I know, I know: apocabigbang. Blame my sister, she made me write this. I'm not even kidding.

Title: We Won't Pass This Way Again (so kiss me with your mouth open)
Rating: R
Pairing/Characters: Sam/Lucifer, mentions of Sam/Ruby; Dean, Lucifer, Sam, mentions of others.
Warnings: Adult language, sexuality, slight bloodplay, Lucifer being a fucking creep.
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rated: r, fic: spn, pairing: sam/lucifer

Comments 60

abby_juniper April 13 2010, 13:07:44 UTC

This was amazing. Phenomenally good - it even brought me out of lurkerdom. I just...the rhythm was stunning - it flowed and wound around on itself and wrapped the reader inside the words; the description was flawless and dark and seductive, with a hint of some innate hunger; the exchanges and dialogue fitted perfectly and...guh. I don't quite know how to put it.

I especially loved this exhange:

A breeze rattles through and the house moans at their backs. It sounds ready to fall down any second, as if the sudden burst of the lighthouse's strobe will be enough to topple it over. Sam stretches out on his back, pillowing his arms behind his head. "There's no moon," he says. "Or stars ( ... )

thevinegarworks April 17 2010, 03:46:29 UTC

I brought you out of lurkerdom? \o/ *fistbump*

Oh man, this comment = my day being totally made. I'm very happy everything worked for you and that it made you catch your breath and sort of think about things. That's exactly what I was going for, so it makes me inexplicably happy that you pointed that out.

Again, really - thank you so much! ♥

ivythefirst April 19 2010, 13:05:11 UTC

You write such beautiful things, but of the ones I've read, this might be the most beautiful of all. I felt overwhelmingly sympathetic to both of them (which probably means I've been reading Mike Carey's Lucifer a little too often.). Anyway, I felt achingly sad at the end, which means you're doing your job magnificently.

thevinegarworks June 23 2010, 02:27:24 UTC

Somehow this comment slipped past me. :O

Anyway, late or not, thank you so much for such a wonderful comment. I'm very glad you enjoyed the fic! ♥

ampliflyer June 7 2010, 21:54:36 UTC

Oh darling, I see how this might be your favorite. Would it come as a surprise if I'd tell you that I found a bit of Entropy in this? It seems that this has some elements, something in the wording and pacing. I'm also very taken a back of how similar our writing styles can be, at places. I swear I just wrote a more of kiss and it could have been plagiarized from this. Sws. Creepy.

I did like this, surprisingly much. It is undoubtedly you, the you who you were, not the you who you are today - this is too mellow to be you today. I would like to quote bits and pieces, but uh, PDA, you know. I think I'll tell you tomorrow how much I did, in fact, like this. Now I need sleep, desperately - alarm clock rings in about 4 hours. UGH. I'll be waiting for you, jsyk. Like everyday.

And oh, I made you some minima-icons today. I'm still hoarding them, but if you show me skin, you might get them. Think about it.

No matter what you say, it's *you*, not Matt or "42". ILU.

thevinegarworks June 23 2010, 02:31:14 UTC

(lol late comment is late, idek)

Yes, yes it is. :) And y'know, I went back and reread it just now and I can see tiny shades of Entropy in it as well. Perhaps this is why it's my favorite? It is written in a style I hold much closer to myself than most of my Dean/Cas, though it's obviously been put through the strainer, so to say. Mellowed. I would love to play in the Sam/Lucifer sandbox unbridled someday, because while I don't give a hoot about SPN these days, their dynamic is still a thing of beauty. And so underrated in fic, too!

Anyway, thank youuuuuuuu, my darling. I'm happy you were still able to enjoy this, even after seeing more, uh...advanced writings from me. :)

♥!

high_flyer87 June 23 2010, 01:23:15 UTC

This...was beautiful. I felt everything so vividly, like a laser. God. Just...beautiful *sigh*.

I love your Lucifer. He's perfect.

Meming this one immediately. It will be read again ;)

thevinegarworks June 23 2010, 02:31:58 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad it worked for you. Sam/Lucifer is such a fun sandbox to play in. :)

♥

tehopheliac January 27 2011, 09:49:19 UTC

Wow. Just... wow. I'm STUNNED. This fic is gorgeous and definitely going on my Delicious (under the "best_fics" tag-- lol, I've very picky and I only put the very best there! For example, I only have 120 fics out of the 1,365 fics bookmarked on my delicious under that tag! X3)

Yeah, off-topic tangent there, sorry. Anyway, I really adore the way you wrote Lucifer in this fic. You are now, officially, the second person in this fandom who's made a Lucifer that rings true to me (the first being entangled_now who introduced me to this pairing via her Fourth Wall series). I love how poetic and smooth this fic comes off. I found myself worried about not wanting it to end only a few paragraphs in! xD

Spilled-Notes has mentioned that you're no longer into SPN anymore (which I completely understand! This is the first time in 9 months that I've tentatively dipped my toes into the pool again. xD), but do you ever find yourself missing it? Missing what you once had in it-- the friends, the love of a great ship, the awesome fic/art, being able to write for it? I find ( ... )

thevinegarworks January 30 2011, 22:24:14 UTC

(Pretend it didn't take me like eight years to reply to this comment, hurr durrrrrr.)

Well AWWW, aren't you sweet! :3 I am beyond happy that you enjoyed the fic and how I wrote Lucifer. I'm definitely not in SPN anymore, but Lucifer was always one of my favourite characters just because of his strangely seductive inhumanity. I just love him. ♥ Anyway, thank youuuu! I am happy you liked it!

Y'know, I actually don't find myself missing it. SPN, for me, had a lot of unnecessary drama and baggage (maybe I just got involved with the wrong people/side of fandom), and with my fandoms now I don't have to deal with that at all. My real life is stressful enough as is; I don't need a fandom to add any more stress and suffering on top of it. The one thing I would say I miss occasionally is the kinship of it - being able to come onto LJ after an episode and know that there was going to be like a million people all freaking out at the same time, ~shaking and crying~ with me. I do miss that, yeah, but overall...no. No, I don't miss it at all. I ( ... )