Crossover: The Tomorrow Trilogy/Cliffton - Say You'll Let Me

[theun4givables]

This is a sequel of sorts to Say Please. Oops. Warning for Savin's knife and blood play kinks.

Devin looked at the piece of mail in front of him, frowning. “The fuck is this, Wes?” he asked, raising an eyebrow. He let his fingers ghost over the envelope, turning it over in his hands.

Comments

[n3m3sis43]

Oh, dude I loved this. Loved how you can tell how much more we know about Wes and Devin as characters than when you wrote Say Please. They are so cute as an established couple and I can kinda see Wes wanting Devin to sleep with Savin again because haha, Wes. And aww at Devin asking permission. Also loved the part where Wes was messing with Devin while he was on the phone. That's about as well as he'd ever handle that.

Knifeplay is not my kink but it was really nice to see it done well. It was insane how little sexy knifeplay stuff I could find on AO3. What I really liked is it wasn't entirely Devin's kink either but ou managed to show his momentary doubts and hesitations while still making it hot.

Also also loved the old joke at the end. And just everything because SavDev may be my favorite crossover pairing ever. :)

[theun4givables]

Yeah, you can really tell that we know a lot more both of them than we did before. I'm glad that you thought they were cute as an established couple -- and yeah, I could kinda see it because Wes knows it's the fucking Emperor and not just some random guy, lolol. And of course Devin asked for permission. The phone part was fun to write, too. xD

Yessss, thank you. Devin being hesitant but willing to try is basically how I'd see it happening. Devin's much more into being hit than cut open, lolol.

xD I'm glad you think so because I think they're my fave crossover pairing, too. But they learn things from one another in my head which makes writing things with Savin in them more annoying lololol

[tjatorra]

This was glorious. Absolutely glorious. Even without knowing the characters, so much personality shines through!

Are you into knifeplay? It's one of my favorite kinks, so I'm curious, because if you're not you did a brilliant job of portraying the building excitement. So erotic and masculine and beautifully described.

[theun4givables]

Hah, Wes and Devin belong to my friend n3m3sis43 and you should totally check out her stuff. ;) Because their personalities are um...much more well known to us now than they were when I wrote the story that comes before this. xD Savin bb is mine.

I am. But it's also been years since I've ever done anything with knives and the like. Savin, though, is way more into it than I am. lol And this was my first time actually WRITING knifeplay so I'm glad that it came across that way to you. :)

[alien_writings]

Oh man, this was hot. I enjoyed it quite a bit, so good job! :D

[theun4givables]

Yay, thanks. :)