LJ Idol Season 10, Week 13: Abandon Hope, All Ye Who Enter Here

[theun4givables]

Li opened his eyes and squinted at the endless blue sky above him. Not a single cloud marred it; the sun beamed, his frail, thin skin practically sizzling with the heat of it. Salt pervaded his senses; his mouth tasted of it, it was all he could smell. The ground -- if he could call it that -- was jagged and rough, digging into the bare skin of his

Comments

[dmousey]

Now this was a fun write! Kept my interest for every word. Poor Li. Anyhoo, hugs and hugs! Peace dudette!

[theun4givables]

Thanks, Mom. <3

Poor Li is only half-right. He's not exactly innocent, either. ;)

(It runs in the family...)

[rayaso]

This was very well written, especially the end. Jordine was wonderfully evil! Your description of what it would be like to lose your legs and return to your original form was excellent.

[theun4givables]

Thank you! Jordine is an unsung favorite of mine -- I don't write her very much and I probably need to write her a little more often. :)

[shadowwolf13]

Twisted and evil! That's one of my favorite combinations. :D

[theun4givables]

It's one of my favorite combinations, too. :) Jordine's one of my favorites because of this, but I sadly don't write her enough. I'm thinking of changing that for CampNaNo, though...

Thanks for commenting! :D

[mamas_minion]

Simply wonderful, I was drawn in from the beginning. His sister is deliciously evil. I feel bad for Li.

[theun4givables]

Thank you! I feel a little bad for Li, too, but something tells me he's not exactly innocent, either...

[sinnamongirl]

Great job!

[theun4givables]

Thank you. :)