LJ Idol Season 10, Week 7: Where I'm From

Jan 31, 2017 19:34

So this piece totally got away from me, but here we are! Just under the wire. :) Much thanks to n3m3sis43, because without her I probably would've been stuck on the last section 5ever with no real direction. She's the real MVP. <3“So where are you from ( Read more... )

original fiction, character: mari, fandom: empire, character: savin, lji: season 10

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eternal_ot February 4 2017, 11:48:12 UTC
Great dialogues and I like the way you seamlessly weaved in the prompt. I seriously love the way you present your characters. A nice read :)

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theun4givables February 4 2017, 13:02:39 UTC
Thank you. :) I love these two and their dynamic a lot, so it's nice to see others enjoying them as well. <3

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penpusher February 4 2017, 20:53:00 UTC
Language can be so inexact when it's not being used well! It's just another aspect of how we constantly have issues with communicaion when dealing with others, no matter where they're from!

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theun4givables February 4 2017, 21:35:19 UTC
Language IS a very inexact thing and humans are notoriously bad at using it well, aren't they? :) I'd like to think we'll get better at it eventually... Thank you for reading.

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murielle February 5 2017, 12:23:55 UTC
Lovely! A lovely complex story about love and friendship. Well done!

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theun4givables February 5 2017, 12:28:14 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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