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Feb 16, 2016 20:58

Devin blinked back at him, his brows knitting together as his mouth opened just a little. “You -- what?” he asked, confusion and something else overtaking his features ( Read more... )

pairing: jazz/devin, original fiction, character: savin, rating: r, character: devin, pairing: jazz/savin, character: jazz, lji: second chance

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BONUS: theun4givables February 17 2016, 02:34:44 UTC
http://openveinwriting.livejournal.com/1868655.html

Role-play post I made a while back that centers around the visit that happens to be the focus of this particular piece. Enjoy, my awful sense of humor. xD

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tonithegreat February 17 2016, 04:26:50 UTC
Ah! A happy (if somewhat pensive) part of their story. I wish it would last for them, but it seems destined not to.

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theun4givables February 17 2016, 10:39:56 UTC
Unfortunately, yeah, it doesn't really last. I am not capable of writing happy for long -- but this is towards the end of the first book and at least all three of them get to be happy for a little while. <3

I do like that the pensiveness came through. Jazz has had a lot of anxiety over his relationships with both Savin and Devin -- because he's poly, because Savin isn't (but poly-friendly lol), and Devin's likely poly but it's never stated. And Savin's handled Jazz's feelings for Devin well but it's still like -- so now that I have these two wonderful people what's about to blow up?

Answer: you don't wanna know, Jazz. xD

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murielle February 17 2016, 07:01:44 UTC
You are a truly beautiful writer.

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theun4givables February 17 2016, 10:40:42 UTC
<3 Thank you.

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theun4givables February 17 2016, 17:21:11 UTC
<3 <3 <3 Thanks, dude.

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whipchick February 18 2016, 17:39:52 UTC
So much meta meta :) I like how some of this mirrors your bond as writers and friends, too.

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theun4givables February 18 2016, 22:49:42 UTC
Aw, thanks. <3 Jazz and Devin do retain a bit of our traits (the long distance thing immediately springs to mind) but jesus they murder the both of us. xD

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