LJ Idol Season 9, Week 21: The Music Made Me Do It

Sep 12, 2014 13:49

Ravi sat at his desk and tapped his fingers over the keys, wishing that time would tick by a little faster. He had a meeting to attend in less than an hour -- a meeting he knew wouldn’t go well ( Read more... )

character: mitchel, literary nonfiction, original fiction, trigger: bad music, lji: season 9, novel: just talk, character: savin, character: jazz, rating: pg-13, character: mark, novel: gray morning, personal, character: james, writing memes

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roina_arwen September 15 2014, 21:03:09 UTC
That's a very unique writing technique. I've not heard any of those songs before (and the only band I've heard of from the top 5 is Incubus), but I love the results, and the back-and-forth between your fiction and your real life stuff. :)

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theun4givables September 15 2014, 21:37:30 UTC
It's one of my favorite writing techniques, honestly. :) I use it to break writer's block all the time, or to help me get started.

I figured a lot of people wouldn't share my eclectic taste in music. :) Incubus is my favorite band, and yet Love Hurts stumped the HELL out of me. I could take it like five different ways and my brain did not want to pick one. When I finally settled on J&S I had about a minute or so left in the song, heh.

I'm glad that the back and forth worked for you. It wasn't necessarily intentional, but I didn't want to write all GM 'verse, either. ;)

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tonithegreat September 17 2014, 01:57:29 UTC
This makes for very readable bite-sized pieces. I enjoyed checking them out!

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theun4givables September 17 2014, 16:29:39 UTC
Thank you. :) This is why I like the exercise, too. You don't have a lot of time so you have to stop thinking and just write. :)

Too bad "Love Hurts," got hit with the overthinking it bug, lol.

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i_17bingo September 18 2014, 11:18:26 UTC
The unexpected transitions were pretty jarring at first, but in the second story, I got into the rhythm and just went where the various micro-stories took me. When I got to the explanation, I was kind of amazed. I'd never heard of this before. I don't know if I could do it, but it's pretty damned cool.

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theun4givables September 18 2014, 13:17:06 UTC
Yeah, unfortunately, the first story was the only one where the end of the song took me by surprise -- so it ended with an unfinished sentence. ;) I figured it might be jarring, but that's also why I presented an explanation (if people made it that far). :)

It's one of my favorite exercises. But I need to give it my undivided attention, too. :) It's hard, but fun!

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penpusher September 18 2014, 14:14:54 UTC
That's a clever writing exercise and the results were better than one would anticipate, based on the technique (and the kid)!

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theun4givables September 18 2014, 14:24:51 UTC
Thanks. :) I'm uh, a good "first pass," kind of writer. :) And I've had plenty of practice with this exercise -- I like it. A lot. xD

The "official five" were written while the child was asleep/at school/otherwise not present (I don't remember when I wrote them but I think he was at school), hah. The false-starts were written while also side-eyeing him and going, "Please refrain from climbing onto the top of our 7ft bookshelf for 20 minutes. Please." ;) (He would no doubt do something after the end of the first song, alas.)

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bleodswean September 18 2014, 15:59:23 UTC
This is a great exercise and your pieces work well strung together! Perfect way to respond to the prompt!!

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theun4givables September 18 2014, 16:10:41 UTC
Thanks. :) I always like the outcome of them, even if it takes a few tries to get properly started.

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