LJ Idol Season 9, Week 20: Intersubjectivity

[theun4givables]

It's INTERSECTIONS WEEK at LJI, and I have chosen the lovely n3m3sis43 as my partner in crime, this go around. ;) My piece is first in the set, and Sarah's can be found here. :) Wes and Devin are not mine, alas. They are the brainchildren of Sarah. :)

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At least Princess can shoot. What can that fool Wes do? Nothing, that’s what. He’s a liability, a

Comments

[n3m3sis43]

I think you meant to say that they are the deformed brainchildren of Sarah, lol. You write them so well. I actually find them likable when you're writing them. XD

[theun4givables]

They are still YOUR brainchildren, though. Deformed or no. ;) And yay! I try. You know I try, lololol.

And I'm glad that you like them when *I* write them, because that means that maybe they actually are likable. xD

[millysdaughter]

They are very likeable.

[theun4givables]

Tell Sarah this, not me! I love Wes and Devin. I don't always like WRITING Wes and Devin (sometimes when I'm writing him he does shit that pisses ME off, lol; and Wes's voice is very difficult for me to imitate), but I love them. SO MUCH. lol

[bleodswean]

So much action here! You are just a tidal wave of physical movement and it carries the reader all the way back to shore!!!

[theun4givables]

Thank you. :) Action sequences and I are not friends. In fact, I even made a facebook post lamenting writing action. xD MOVEMENT, HOW DOES IT WORK???

[bleodswean]

I think you're mistaken. ;) Sometime we agonize more over those things we are good at....and don't realize we are good at them.

[theun4givables]

Hmmmm, maybe. :) Again, thanks. <3

[beeker121]

Why do people never notice the essential utility of the ones who are doing the cooking and cleaning and organizing of the basics? I could tell throughout this how important it was to Wes to be useful and how huge it is that Devin has acknowledged that he is.

[theun4givables]

They never do until the person who usually does those htings no longer does those things. ;) And it's probably because they're so basic people just take it for granted.

Yes. :) Because Devin's opinions on anything/everything are extremely important to Wes. I'm glad that came through loud and clear.

[uncawes]

It's hard reading a story where you see your name.
Not saying I didn't like this piece - I love how you write.

But...
Have you two been talking to my ex?
She'd tell you I'm useless and a weakness. Did my job as sperm donor - services no longer required.

[theun4givables]

Been there, done that. It does make the reading a little more interesting. :) And thank you!

And nope, we haven't been! That's a shame, though, that your ex would say those sorts of things. =/

[jem0000000]

Lol, nope. Because Wes would never be useless to Devin.

[theun4givables]

Yeah, but Wes can sure as hell convince himself he is useless, if he wants. ;) Poor bbs.