Gray Morning Fanfiction -- Forgiveness: Chapter 13

[theun4givables]

I am an evil, evil bitch. Enjoy!
Previous chapters:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 11 | 12I think it’s been months since I’ve last stood inside this graveyard. I can feel the Guard’s presence, but they hang back, understanding that this is just one of the many times I really need some privacy. The grass has come in thick, and plenty of

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[alien_writings]

Oh nooooooooooes!!! Things were going well and actually kind of sweet, and then THIS happens! I felt my stomach sink when I found out Mitchel was... still the same old Mitchel, basically.

This story warrants my "fuck" icon because that's the kind of reaction I had.

"Evil" is right! :O

I shouldn't be that surprised something like this happened -- you ARE notoriously against happy endings, lol.

Mitchel showed no remorse to Savin, but does he feel even a little bit bad? How genuine were his feelings for Savin, if he even had any?

How many chapters are left after this?

[theun4givables]

I mean, did you really expect anything different? Of course, I gave Mitchel apparent feelings and I had to go and remind people that no, this person is a right bastard, don't ever trust him. Or don't trust me. I'm not sure which is really the truest statement, here. xD

I'm honestly not sure how genuine his feelings for Savin were, if he has any emotions at all. I haven't written beyond "It goes off." yet, so I don't know how Mitchel acts from this point forward.

I'd imagine one, maybe two chapters left after this. I really think it's only one more -- the climax is just about over and I would need to wrap things up, after that. Which, I imagine, isn't a lot.

I'm just glad that Savin doesn't seem as surprised about all this as he could have been. I guess he didn't really trust Mitchel, after all.