Gray Morning Fanfiction -- Forgiveness: Chapter 12

[theun4givables]

It's really fun retconing this fanfic to fit both old and new canon. Of course, I think I'm only a chapter or two away from the end, now. Also, I have a very Ravi-centric thing that I need to post here, too. I'll probably post that tomorrow. :) Until then, a warning for a tiny bit of (mostly glossed over) m/m sexiness. Enjoy!
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[alien_writings]

These two! These two! Even though their relationship has obviously evolved, they're still so much themselves. The first part was amusing, and then it went straight to angstyville (because you wrote it and when do things NOT go to angstyville with you?).

[theun4givables]

The challenge for me, when writing these two as an actual couple, is to remain as in character as is humanly possible. The fact that their banter can BE amusing and lighthearted and not angry always amused me, but it's often so hard to do. I'm glad it worked for you. :)

The angst is my trademark. I can't go a full light and fluffy chapter.