LJ Idol Season 9, Week 02: The Missing Stair

[theun4givables]

You’re backing out of the driveway when you feel your brand new car scrape against one of the many others you were trying desperately to avoid. First thing that runs through your head is: of course I’d fucking back into another car in my own driveway, the second is: Fuck, whose car did I hit?As you pull the car forward and step out of it, you grit

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[theun4givables]

You know you wanna lay it on me. ;)

[adoptedwriter]

I like the 2nd person. POV. AW

[theun4givables]

Thank you. :) It's kind of my default when writing about myself.

[eternal_ot]

Mine too actually..:)

[theun4givables]

I think I wrote 5 paragraphs of the fiction idea and this started screaming louder as a result. =p So not really. xD

Awww, it's really not that hard once you get used to it. :) There's certainly a little bit of a learning curve, though!

Thanks. <3

[shay_writes]

Me too. I don't think I could do it as well.

[theun4givables]

It's always worth a shot! :) Idol is a good time to experiment.

[solstice_singer]

So much vulnerability in this post. Very raw and poignant. Nicely done.

[theun4givables]

Thank you. Vulnerable seemed to be where my head was at, yesterday.

[i_will_not_say]

You do a good job with the second person. It's not a mode I think could easily write in.

Then again, I think I've tried it a grand total of one time, heh.

[theun4givables]

Thank you. :) Second person is almost easier for me to write in than first. I have no idea why.

Perhaps it'd be worth it to try again? :)