Gray Morning -- Chapter ?? #2

[theun4givables]

So I continued from that chapter I finished writing yesterday... and ended up writing a whole chapter today? Somehow? And of course, I had meant for this to be responses for "I'll make you regret this!" and "I'll take you both on!" for the February Table of Doom, but I think I had to set it up, first, and that THAT sequence is next chapter. I think

Comments

[alien_writings]

I must admit I love seeing Savin and Ravi interact, and I'm hoping (probably in vain) that there's some way Ravi doesn't die in this version. It's a new canon, so maybe? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Haha, I know you're not the type to spare people's feelings, though!

I liked the echo of Savin's using the "(fake) new tenants" thing when Mitchel showed up. Come on, dude, put the pieces together!

Mitchel’s eyes trailed the length of Savin’s body

Taken out of context at least, this little phrase totally makes me think of something other than disapproval over Savin's pajamas. ;) (You've warped my brain with your shipping. :P)

[theun4givables]

"New canon so maybe," is about all I can give you. Pretty sure he still dies (poor bb), but at least shippers have the chance to maybe imagine an OT3 with Jazz, Savin, and Ravi? Lol. Because writing them interacting with one another is kinda making me ship Ravi and Savin a lot, lol.

He's working on it! I think he's about to have a bath epiphany, really. I started writing the next chapter and I know he's about to make the connection soon.

I totally wanted that line to be taken out of context because I ship that so hard it's hard to break myself from wanting to turn it canon. Woops.