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The Tomorrow Trilogy Fanfiction - Forgiveness: Chapter 11

Dec 20, 2013 12:47

I don't even know anymore, guys. Also, I apparently made a new character. I like her, maybe she'll find a home somewhere else.
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“Savin, wake up.”

( I groan, rolling onto my stomach and being met with a warm body instead of an empty mattress. )

character: mitchel, pov: savin, pairing: savin/mitchel, trigger: language, fandom: empire, character: savin, rating: r, fanfiction

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alien_writings December 21 2013, 01:37:20 UTC

Saying the wrong name? Oops. And look, Mitchel is having emotions again. Is it just me, or is this version of Mitchel way more emotionally open then any previous version of the guy?

It's interesting seeing Mitchel being the one pushing for more. Why do I have a feeling Savin might be the one to screw things up, if they do indeed get screwed up? I think it's my worrying about a self-fulfilling prophecy of sorts -- Savin's convinced any relationship with Mitchel would end badly, so his current relationship will end badly. Don't you have to believe something can work if you actually want it to work?

It's funny how new characters just sometimes decide to exist, isn't it? I liked Amelia -- she amused me, especially where she listed all the reasons Savin and Mitchel's recent...activity was so very obvious. Maybe she'll end up in the same new universe Ryin and Jordine might go to after being kicked out of the Tomorrow verse?

theun4givables December 21 2013, 10:25:50 UTC

This version of Mitchel might be the real version of him -- when he's actually emotionally invested in someone. Like I have this feeling I needed to figure out this particular side of him in order to make a lot of TT canon work -- because his attachment to Jazz is ever present and is what will make the twist at the end of the books (him being involved with the Resistance) that much harder to swallow/figure out.

And probably -- Savin has to learn how to relax and just accept things for how they are, which he isn't always great at. Poor bb, it'll be interesting to see how things go.

I don't know if she'll be in their 'verse or if she'll get her own or what. She definitely BELONGS somewhere, but I never get a whole name like I did with her so she wants to exist, somewhere. I'll figure out where, eventually. ;)