Writerverse - Table of Doom, Prompt: Pierced Through the Heart

[theun4givables]

So apparently, I'm in "write out of order" mode. For whatever reason, this began speaking to me last night, and I figured it'd be in my best interest to listen. Takes place towards the end of Gray Morning, after Savin's abuse and after Jazz has to come back from staying with Ravi. Enjoy.Jazz leaned against the couch, wishing his whole body didn’t

Comments

[n3m3sis43]

Okay, I confess I'm having a hard time keeping straight what happens when in the new timeline. So... was this a random dude attacking Jazz (like before he went to Ravi's in the previous version) or is it related to the Resistance now? Or him being an NB or... ?

Not that it's really relevant to this particular scene but I'm just trying to make it all solidify in my head. I don't know how anyone even remotely keeps track of my shit since I refuse to write in order for more than ten minutes.

Gah, poor Jazz. I don't think I'd want my abuser to touch me again ever, let alone so soon--no matter how much I loved him. But I know the truth is you don't stop loving someone just because they hurt you. I think you did a really good job showing the tension between the fear and caution Jazz knows he should feel and the desire to have Savin touch him again, the old way.

Poor bb.

[theun4givables]

I'm 99% sure it's hate-crime related as opposed to a member of the Resistance. Like, with Jazz having no street experience now, I think he ran into a bad area on his way back and since he's a pretty boy with blond hair...

I don't know how I manage to keep track of your shit, either, lol. But I do!

I knowwww. Poor bb indeed.