The Tomorrow Trilogy Fanfiction - Out of Control: Chapter 7

[theun4givables]

If you're reading this particular fanfic for the first time, it's the sequel to n3m3sis43's Control. The previous chapters can be found here:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6Not long after Jazz leaves, I find myself back down at the bar again. Ordering another scotch and knocking it back quickly, just to feel it burn the back of my throat. As much as I want to cry, I

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[theun4givables]

It looks like he did -- I totally didn't expect Jazz to do that. But I guess I also needed to write more of the canon/figure out how some parts of book 2 go before I could write this chapter. Him backing off makes sense, in an unhappy way. =/

The phone sex was also unexpected. That's Savin and Mitchel for you. xD

[alien_writings]

Oh man, this was hot (unexpected phone sex!) and then sad (Jazz just letting Savin go like that!). Damn, you and your emotional roller coaster-ing!

I enjoyed this chapter. :)

[theun4givables]

The phone sex was something I totally didn't intend to write. WTF, Savin. It just kinda...happened.

But then I saw Jazz walking in and interrupting it and I was like "Oh. That kinda makes sense." And yes, it is very sad. And I love emotional roller coasters. :) They're what I do best!

Yay. :)