The Tomorrow Trilogy Fanfiction - Trust

[theun4givables]

So 500themes gave me the theme "Toxic Tease" and well, I thought of Savin. And then I thought of n3m3sis43's TT fanfic Control. This would take place after Chapter Six but before her planned events for Chapter Seven. Heavy warnings for Savin's blood and knifeplay kinks.After Mitchel’s little stunt of approaching me in the Palace Gardens a second time, the

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[n3m3sis43]

Okay, knifeplay isn't my kink, but this was still pretty hot. It was nice that Mitchel wasn't squicky about it. And Savin was way more into it than I realized. I loved how even he was like "how do I even do surgery without getting turned on?" So amusing.

I won't mention the part I've rolled my eyes at and LOLed at repeatedly, because I've done that enough already. Oh, Savin.

The part of this I liked best was the nice setup for the ending of my fic, and how Savin was clearly developing feelings beyond just sexy ones for Mitchel. Not only the trust part, but how he almost gave in and let Mitchel finish at the end.

[theun4givables]

Savin really was WAY more into this than I thought. Jesus. And Mitchel not being squicky was a huge plus. lololol

I knooooow. xD

Yeah, he almost cares enough about Mitchel to actually let him get his pleasure, too. And that? Ain't a good thing. ;) It'll be fun to see how your final section goes because man, the thought of that is turning me on way more than it should. lolol