Apples

[thesiriusmoon]

Title: Apples
Author: Thesiriusmoon
Beta'd by: The wonderful minimoonylupin! Though I did go and tweak a bit after she got done with it, so any flagrant mistakes are mine!
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: Still not mine. Sigh.
Word Count: 2210
Summay: Just the sound of an apple drove Remus absolutly bonkers...
A/N:  The first quote is from the King James Bible.

Comments

[starlite_gone]

I liked this :) I really like how you interspersed different stories/mentions of apples within this story. It was cool, especially since Remus is such a reader so it made me think of him thinking of his life in the context of myths and legends, if that makes sense.

I also liked how Sirius pushed at the thing he knew was getting to Remus. And the mention of how Remus and Moony are the same. One thing is, this made me think about how much it would suck to have an apple fetish because, man, that would be hard to get away from in innocent situations like someone just eating a snack.