Comments | thesecretdoor: [one-shot] scored

thesecretdoor

[one-shot] scored

Jan 30, 2017 22:47

Title: Scored
Pairing: Yamada Ryosuke x Yabu Kota
Rating/Warnings: NC-17
Summary: Yabu burns his own DVDs and not all of them are football
Word Count: 1890
Author's Note: Pretty rushed and sloppily edited but it contains Yabu and it's his birthday so good excuse to get it done. Inspired by that Ousama no Brunch episode where Yabu said he makes ( Read more... )

group: hey!say!jump, length: oneshot, genre: smut, rating: nc-17, member: yamada ryosuke

Comments 4

acgreon January 31 2017, 02:09:27 UTC

I've been begging, praying, hoping someone would write a fricken gorgeous smut fic for Yamada and Yabu and this is the answer to all my pleas.

I love every line of this, it was just great and I have no words to thank you for writing it. I'm adding it to my memories so I can safeguard it till eternity.

thesecretdoor January 31 2017, 09:04:35 UTC

Aww, thank you!! This comment makes me so happy!!

I actually have another Yama x Yabu fic almost finished but I feel like I can't write Yabu very well >_< I'm sure it will be posted sometime in the near future any way!!

Thank you very much for reading :D I'm really happy you liked it!

chained_akame January 31 2017, 10:50:55 UTC

I feel the need to somehow give you a present or something, because I've been in such a big need for a Yamada x Yabu fic, and you just gave me that, and it was hotter than I dared imagine and now I'm just a melting mess on the floor and al;gjadkgha;lrjgkasarlhjslk

I guess I don't need to say once more how much I love your before-we-do-the-thing setting, I'm gonna end up annoying XD But when they actually got down to business I was grinning so widely, and it was so hot and so perfectly written and I just can't choose which of the two seemed hotter in my head, but together they were just UNF.

The ending, though. I laughed so much, such cuteness XD

Thank SO MUCH for writing this, I was starting to believe I was the only one who actually liked those two together *__*

thesecretdoor February 1 2017, 16:22:01 UTC

Your comment is more than enough :P I'm really happy that you liked it and I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!!

I really like the idea of Yama x Yabu...I have another one almost finished but I don't feel like I can write Yabu very well at all >_< I'm glad you liked this one at least :D

Lol, I actually don't like the ending >_< but I couldn't find a good way to end it so random Inoo appearance :D