[multi-part] Feed On Me Follow Up: Everything

Nov 02, 2014 10:14

Title: Everything
Pairing: JuriTai
Rating/Warnings: R; none graphic descriptions of underage sexual activity.
Word Count: 3746
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, and only the words are mine.
Summary: Ever since he found out Taiga's secret, Juri has been the only one he can turn to, Juri is everything to him ( Read more... )

genre: angst, rating: r, member: kyomoto taiga, genre: romance, genre: dark, member: tanaka juri, length: multi-part, group: sixtones

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dori_liv November 5 2014, 17:30:10 UTC
asdgjkls ♥♥ ;___; YOU CONTINUED IT!!! And it's so perfect ;__;

I've always had a liking for vampires (Buffy and Angel generation kid) and this verse is so great and you write it so well ;__;

Poor Taiga so alone <3 But the there's Juri, and lol he's awfully calm about the whole thing. Barely even bats an eye xD And everything in the store room is so intense ( ... )

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thesecretdoor November 9 2014, 06:14:13 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting on this one too ♥ I'm always happy to hear that people like my writing!!

I'm completely Buffy/Angel obsessed myself and I love writing vampire fic too!! I have a whole bunch of them that I'm working on, mostly with the same kind of 'vampire' rules as in this one that will maybe one day see the light of day - insert joke about vampires and light of day.

Since everything was from Juri's side last time and Taiga had this image of being all cool and seductive, I really wanted to get across Taiga's feelings this time - maybe it's the Buffy-verse influence again but I really sympathize with vampires >_And Juri, even as a kid he always seemed like nothing really phased him and that's totally how I saw him reacting to this! I wanted to write more of their discovery period, but I was already a bit worried by the amount of underage porn and whether people would want to read it with all that in, I'm not going to rule out a little side story/omake about that sometime in the future though because I just ( ... )

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thesecretdoor November 16 2014, 04:43:33 UTC
Thank you for commenting!! *__*

I'm always wary of putting in too much underage stuff >_< If it's done right I have no problem with it (within reason - like not too young, consensual etc) but I'm always a little worried about if other people won't like it. Having them discuss what happened/will happen made it feel a little better to me so I'm glad you liked it :)

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arisakjk19 September 7 2015, 18:15:36 UTC
I got an addiction on vampires fics, mostly HSJ as the characters... but i can give this a double double thumbs up! I really like this, hahaha especially Juri as the uke. o/ thankies! Hope you'll make fics of them :)

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thesecretdoor September 11 2015, 00:45:25 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment!! Comments make me super happy ♡♡♡

I adore vampire stories too!! I'm actually working on two different sequels to this >_< *sequels are my weakness* one Marius centric and one Yamada centric, I just hope they're not too ooc since I'm not mega familiar with their personalities!!!

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arisakjk19 September 11 2015, 02:14:11 UTC
Really??? Hahah that makes me happy! I'll looking forward to your FumArius sequel.

Actually, changing attitudes of someone in a fic is quite okay too. Its not only depend on their real atitude so its okay o/

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thesecretdoor September 11 2015, 12:01:36 UTC
I'm glad you're looking forward to the sequels, the Marius one is almost finished (but I can't think of a title T_T)

Yeah, I guess it isn't too important that they're totally in character, especially with the vampire spin on things :)

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