[oneshot] Favours and Firsts

Feb 24, 2014 08:50

Title: Favours and Firsts (aka JuriShin attempt #11)
Pairing: Juri x Shintaro
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3423
Warnings: Sex involving a sixteen year old.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone.
Summary: Shintaro has a favour to ask of Juri.
A/N: Written for rikikomori for the Fund-Raising for Typhoon Haiyan Victims Project.

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member: morimoto shintaro, length: oneshot, member: tanaka juri, genre: smut, rating: nc-17, group: sixtones

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ext_1497137 February 24 2014, 13:57:14 UTC
it's like a puzzle he's been trying to solve for years.

i feel like you have shintaro's character spot on and that makes this 10,000 times better. i totally forgot what i asked you for, other than the pairing, so i don't remember if the whole "bff take my virginity" thing was my idea or yours, but either way i loved it so, so much. how certain shintaro was, how careful juri was, and omg the sex itself was beautiful. <333333 the ending where they decide to be together is so cute. thanks for writing this for me!!! :D :D

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thesecretdoor February 24 2014, 18:33:11 UTC
Thank you for such a lovely comment :D I'm glad you felt like I got Shintaro's character right too :)

Your only specifications were not-established relationship and Shintaro's first kiss - the more graphic the better. I had so many different ideas for the fic but in most of them I struggled to get from first kiss to sex without making Shin too ooc >_< A few of the other ideas will probably get posted eventually though :) You've given me a real thing for JuriShin now!

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rin_aokuro February 24 2014, 16:06:37 UTC
Aww it was so cute! I have this soft spot for first times and I really liked this one♥ Thank you! ^^

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thesecretdoor February 24 2014, 18:35:44 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it ^_^ I have a bit of a soft spot for first times myself!! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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thesecretdoor February 24 2014, 18:36:29 UTC
Thank you very much :D Thank you for taking the time to comment too!

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mousapelli February 24 2014, 22:01:39 UTC
aww, yay Juri/shin! I'm always excited for more than that.

Poor Juri holding back all that time and trying to be responsible and not mess it all up for Shintarou by wanting all this stuff when Shintarou is telling him just to do it already and get it over with. Awwww, Juri.

Cute!

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isshofluffy February 24 2014, 22:49:09 UTC
Omgomgomgingahsjsksjzjs this is so cute and adorable kyaaaa
Jurishin ftw sobs

At first i was like, damn shin was just using juri and that juri is a martyr but then deep inside i know-- i knew shin has something for juri as well.

I like how juri became possessive after and shintaro agreeing in a childlike but mishievous atittude aaaaahhh this is great okay

Shin's firsts are with juri kyaaaaaa

thank yoooooou this is awesome weite more jurishin o u o xoxo

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