Chapter 14: Lie

Oct 07, 2006 07:27

Chapter summary:
Kame's true illness wasn't a mental condition.
The plot that Kame & Pi planned.
Jin left Japan to search for Kame in US, but Kame was in Japan all the while!
Kame's letter to Pi

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Maybe Papa would never know the true reason why Kamenashi left.

Pi told me that Kamenashi’s ‘berserk episode’ was a plotted one, and he was the one ( Read more... )

fanfic, hanrukana, translation

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thescarletscar October 8 2006, 03:27:01 UTC
thank you~ :D

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sahira_chan October 7 2006, 15:22:42 UTC
This was written very well and translated beautifully. I must admit, I got a bit teary after reading this, but more importantly, felt for the characters.♥

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thescarletscar October 8 2006, 03:28:49 UTC
thank you!

as i was translating, i tried to put myself in kame's shoes so that the letter would have more 'feelings' inside. i hoped it worked~ :)

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carey_chan October 7 2006, 16:22:20 UTC
gosh...I´m all teary again...T___T that fic is so damn cruel...*sighs deep* u`r one brave girl to translate it..and I`m really grateful for it *bows*

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thescarletscar October 8 2006, 03:30:05 UTC
*hugs* i think i'm one brave girl and also an emotion M girl. i mean, i just had to choose a fic that makes everyone cry all the time. *embarrassed*

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carey_chan October 8 2006, 08:21:07 UTC
u don`t have to be embarrassed about making so many people cry..u don`t really (physically) hurt them do you? +smiles* When I was in 5th grade ,I dd the same...I translated a fic from eng -->german ,because I cried my heart out while reading it.Sharing feelings is one good thing isn`t it? even though it`s somewhat sad that you start crying *sighs* great job ^^

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snow_meow October 7 2006, 18:24:00 UTC
*cries*

This is so sad.
Pi is a very good friend to both Jin and Kame. From Kame's letters, Pi was his shoulder to cry on and the person to give him strength to carry on with his decision to leave Jin. I think if Pi was not by Kame's side, Kame wouldn't have the strength to leave Jin and he would have hurt himself too.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

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thescarletscar October 8 2006, 03:32:54 UTC
*nods* yeap i think they are all just so... helpless. and i like it because this story expressed their helplessness without making anyone in akamepi evil.

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kanika_ishtar October 8 2006, 00:16:10 UTC
*starts crying* D:

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thescarletscar October 8 2006, 03:33:27 UTC
*gives ishtar tissue paper*

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