Comments | thescarletscar: Chapter 29: Truth

thescarletscar

Chapter 29: Truth

Nov 03, 2006 17:52

Chapter Summary
The truth.
Jin's POV.

?!! WTF?!
Did I hear things wrongly?
Papa actually said… “He… isn’t around anymore”…

My tensed up feelings relaxed in a split second.
But at the following moment, shock overwhelmed me. It was as if all the skeletons were out of the closet, and the truth was exposed. My initial knowledge was overturned yet again. The ( Read more... )

harukana yakusoku

Comments 23

anonymous November 3 2006, 15:15:40 UTC

this chapter is very sad.i cant stop crying

thescarletscar November 3 2006, 17:34:25 UTC

*hugs* i hope you're feeling better now~ ^^

anonymous November 3 2006, 15:25:26 UTC

im not a big fan of fanfic but when a friend send me the links to your journal and askd me to read it i can't believe how beautiful it is.i was crying from chapter 6-29 its too sad and painful.the 3 of them experiencing what LOVE is and being hurt in the process is so hard to take, especially yamapi's character who he couldn't express his feeling for kame and just merely a friend to him.jin finding out the truth is very painful..i can't stop crying and been reading this chapter for 5x already.

thank you so much for translating it.

looking forward to the next charpter.

thescarletscar November 3 2006, 17:36:43 UTC

aawww.. thank you for commenting. hmm this fic is personally my favourite, that's why i knew i had to translate it. glad you enjoyed it but sorry to make you cry though. (i cried pretty badly when i was reading the original too).

it'll end in 2 chapters more. so stay tuned~ i would love to hear opinions about the fic when i'm done with the finale. :)

kanika_ishtar November 5 2006, 06:24:36 UTC

Ahhh, I really shouldn't read sad things like this when I'm already sad...*sigh* Noe I'm crying. ^^;;

This was a gorgeous chapter like usual. I have so much respect for both Jin and Kazuya in this story that I can't really grasp it. Thank you so much for translating this. ♥

takagi November 5 2006, 06:32:06 UTC

thank you! :D *nods in agreement* i know this is a bad time to update akame angst/sadness but.. >.<

glad you enjoyed it!
p/s: mind if i add you on my personal LJ?

kanika_ishtar November 5 2006, 06:38:39 UTC

It has nothing to do with them really...I was already sad from something else. But I think it was good you did~ Even though it's sad, it's still happy. Or to me, anyways. ^^;;

And of course! I'll add you back right now. ^^

sumomo_yuki November 5 2006, 07:50:22 UTC

IT's so sad.. i gotta listen to something funky and fast or... sigh~ i'd be in a depressive mood later! but good write...

thescarletscar November 5 2006, 09:08:31 UTC

thank you!! :) yeah i'm trying to listen to really silly songs as i'm editing through the chapters. ^^ glad you liked it~

neuromanticist November 5 2006, 08:37:30 UTC

Hmm...I don't think I've commented before. So first off. I think you've done a great job with the translation. *thumbs up* The original story itself is amazing as well, of course. I'm glad I got a copy of it when I had the chance.

Anyways...onto the real reason why I'm commenting.

About this part...

"It helped that Papa was an accomplished actor. Whenever he couldn’t fight his longings anymore, he would go to his studio and read his scripts. No matter how badly he cried in his studio, Mama would assume that he was merely immersing himself into his roles."

When I first read the original, I had interpreted it as that...she simply didn't bother him during those times because she understood that it (i.e., the time alone, the time to cry) was what he needed? And that was why she wouldn't bother him?

Actually...haha. I don't know what I'm trying to say. Don't mind me. *runs off and hideee*

thescarletscar November 5 2006, 09:04:12 UTC

Hi! ^^ thank you for commenting! i think the original is much better because the intensity of the fic is sooo much stronger *cries* in the original.

*gasps* you mean you bought a copy of the fic? or managed to download it? LOL i think bright must have thought that i'm crazy when i emailed her to ask if i could translate the story. *embarrassed*

I shared the same thought as you actually. (I mean, she had like freaking high IQ score so i bet she knew more than what she seemed to know). She a victim in her own way too eh... ahh. i have so many to say about the fic (this fic made me think about a lot of things xD) so maybe yeah we could just share some thoughts on it when the final chapters are posted.

p/s: just a personal question. did you cry when you read it?

neuromanticist November 5 2006, 20:22:20 UTC

Yes, I actually own a copy of this fic. *is proud* Lol. ^______^v Funny how that happened, though. Like, the first time I read this fic, it was hosted on this site called 'chu-chu-chu' which has long since closed down, and the fic wasn't even completed yet. Heck, I didn't even know who Kame and Jin and Pi were back then 'cause I was still in my VF-phase (blonde and pre-gangsta Yusuke was so much loveee *drooldrool ( ... )