A Wild Rumpus (Star Trek RPF Fanfic)

Aug 21, 2010 21:22

Title: A Wild Rumpus
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairing: Chris/Zach (and a side of Karl/Zoe)
Rating: R
Word Count: 7,080
Description: Chris runs away from the paparazzi, and into an adventure. Written for reel_startrek, for the movie Where the Wild Things Are. (I would consider this “inspired by” as opposed to a retelling of the movie. Additional ( Read more... )

rpf, fic, pinto, challenge

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1lostone August 22 2010, 13:48:50 UTC
I told you this was great before, but on another read thru it's just better and better.

Sigh.

It's so absolutely perfect with the book (Haven't seen the movie, but the book is sort of imprinted on my soul.) LOVE LOVE LOVE stuff like this and once again you made it seem easy and flawless! :D <3

*waves i<3therumjournals pennant and shakes pompoms*

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therumjournals August 22 2010, 23:32:58 UTC
aww, thanks again, bb!! you rock!

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coeurdesoleil August 22 2010, 14:13:47 UTC
Awww, this was adorable! I haven't seen Where the Wild Things Are, but I adored this! It's got a sweet, naive and very fragile tone to it. I loved how the POV somehow managed to convey both Chris' childlike wonder at the events unfolding around him and this kinda fairy-talesque sense that what was happening was ordinary and extraordinary at the same time. Hmm... that problably made ZERO sense... haha.

Anyway, this was really beautiful and sweet!

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therumjournals August 23 2010, 00:38:29 UTC
this kinda fairy-talesque sense that what was happening was ordinary and extraordinary at the same time - that does make sense, because that's exactly what i was going for! yay, it worked! thanks :D

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monkeyonthelam August 22 2010, 14:56:52 UTC
What a wonderful journey this fic is. I haven't seen the movie, but I remember read the book many years ago. I would have been happy with a fluffy and schmoopy fic but the angst in the middle towards the end made it much more real (which is quite a feat considering the universe this fic is set in). Thank you for the wonderful fic!

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therumjournals August 23 2010, 00:39:44 UTC
the movie has some angst in it as well, which was kind of surprising to me, but was definitely something i wanted to incorporate into the story, so i'm glad you liked that part of it as well. thanks so much!

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illariy August 22 2010, 19:25:50 UTC
Oh, this is so beautiful. It feels like a fairytale almost. I like the mix of emotions and child-like handling of them. A couple of scenes made me chuckle (Noah's birthday! Zach running away at being confronted!) but overall, I found the atmosphere deliciously bittersweet. Thank you for sharing. ♥

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therumjournals August 23 2010, 00:40:50 UTC
i'm glad you enjoyed the humor, i was trying to get a good mix of emotions in there, and that was an important one! thanks so much!

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takhallus August 22 2010, 22:11:12 UTC
Oh my God that was so lovely! It was adorable when they admitted they Superliked each other XD

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therumjournals August 23 2010, 00:41:31 UTC
aww, yay, i liked that part, too! thanks :-)

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