Fic: I Tried to Tell You, But All I Could Say (Part 4/4)

[therumjournals]

Title: I Tried to Tell You, But All I Could Say
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairings: Zach/OMC, Chris/OMC, Chris/Zach
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 32,780
Warnings: infidelity, drinking/mention of alcohol abuse, manipulative/abusive behavior, explicit scenes featuring OMC, dubcon (while drunk), non-con (attempted)
Summary: Zach’s new boyfriend sends

Comments

[molleo]

Holy shit, bb, you just ripped me apart and glued me back together in four magnificent chapters. Wow.

[the_deep_magic]

Oops! Posted comment in the wrong place. Fixed now. Thank you for your time.

[therumjournals]

i'm so very glad - that's all i hope for in a fic like this. thank you for reading, bb!

[the_deep_magic]

Oog, no lie, this was hard to read in parts, but only because it was so devastatingly well-written. The way Dylan slowly wormed himself into Chris life... I nearly cheered aloud when Zach punched him in the face

[therumjournals]

thank you so, so much for this wonderful comment! i'm especially glad that you loved that paragraph so much - it's one of the last pieces that I changed/edited and it took me a little while until I felt okay with it - so i'm thrilled to hear that it was a success!

[marlee813]

Alright... I am really not coherent enough to leave a response that is worthy of what kind of emotional rollercoaster you've put me through but I'll say this: you know that feeling where you don't really know what to do or say. You don't know what time it is... what DAY it is and like everything has just been ripped out of you and your chest is tight and you feel like laughing and crying at the same time.

This is how I feel right now.

Flawless bb. <3

[therumjournals]

i do know that feeling, especially after reading certain fics - so i'm so proud to know that my writing was able to inspire it! thank you so much, bb!

[theofenraven]

*applauds*

[therumjournals]

*bows*

thank you!!

[shutterbitch]

Whoa, I must not've read the warnings well enough, because I was NOT prepared for the angst in this, but MAN, that was one hell of a ride.

Did I say Dylan was a slimy douchebag? I meant he was an insidious parasitic bastard and I hope he got made someone's bitch in jail. Someone who could hold him down and make him bleed for what he did to Chris and Zach.

[therumjournals]

hmm, in retrospect, i suppose i didn't put a warning for "angst"...

but i'm so glad you powered through! thank you so much for reading, and i'm sure that Dylan got what he deserved :-)