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Merry Bachelors - 2/2

Apr 21, 2011 22:41

Title: Merry Bachelors
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairing: Chris/Zach
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 11,120 (total)
Summary: Ten years from now, Zach reads a promising script.

Continued from Part 1

( Part 2 )

merry bachelors, nc-17, rpf, fic, pinto

Comments 112

karmic_fic April 22 2011, 03:18:58 UTC

“I don’t want our story to end like theirs.”

“With a montage?”

“Shut up.”

-that was perfect, BTW

ABSOFREAKINGLUTELY AWESOME AND AMAZING

therumjournals April 25 2011, 01:06:07 UTC

thank you thank you for the comment AND the lovely sparkletext! whee!

medea_fic April 22 2011, 03:33:24 UTC

Oh, I'm all TEARY, what the hell are you doing to me??

LOVE. LOVE THIS, argh.

Zach looked at him, wondering if he’d been thinking of that party. Wondering if he ever felt what Zach felt sometimes, an emptiness in the pit of his stomach like he’d forgotten to do something a long time ago.

Ow, ow, ow. Ugh, I love the angst but this kind is so real it’s a little painful.

“Who the fuck is Henry?!”

Heeeee. Oh, Zach.

“Careful,” Neal said, looking him up and down. “All the blood might rush to your head.”

“Let’s hope,” Zach grunted, flexing his fingers against the hardwood. “It’s spent the last two weeks on vacation in the vicinity of my dick.”

HAH!

And then after that I just got completely caught up in the stooooory and forgot to note everything I loved because I loved EVERYTHING!!!!

This Cary Grant fan is so very, very delighted. Thank you for this!!

therumjournals April 25 2011, 01:07:15 UTC

YAY! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this! I'm dying to re-watch The Philadelphia Story now :-D Thank you so much!

screamlet April 22 2011, 03:45:28 UTC

GAHHHHH I HATE YOU I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS

PUT IT ON THE AO3 I NEED TO CARRY IT WITH ME EVERYWHERE

ALSO I AM WEEPING, you know, metaphorically, because i am a robot. my robot heart loves this, because it's amazing, also i hate you.

therumjournals April 25 2011, 00:56:09 UTC

Here ya go! :-)

You know what they say...when you've made screamlet's robot heart weep, you know you've made it. so thanks!

aprilleigh24 April 22 2011, 03:48:38 UTC

The joy i have in my heart right now....

No words yet. Still stuck at 'crazy sounding squeeks and mad failing about' stage.

OMG.this.is.awesome. And I love you for writing it. And a proper feedback filled note will come later when I have my mind back.

therumjournals April 25 2011, 01:00:37 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad that you liked it! Your prompt really inspired me, and I really enjoyed writing this! Thanks again for bidding on me!

aprilleigh24 September 17 2011, 05:58:43 UTC

Just- you know- just so you know- I pretty much reread this at least once a month (it's a hormonal thing i'm sure) and I still fucking LOVE it each and every time.

Still delights and makes me gloriously happy/tad weepy and it's still just-

it's just fucking the best and I'm happy I have it in my life.

therumjournals September 19 2011, 04:30:04 UTC

Awww, thank you so much, bb! That is wonderful and amazing to hear, so thank you for commenting again and letting me know :-D I'm still quite proud of this one and it seems to have brought joy to many people! :-D

marlee813 April 22 2011, 04:02:34 UTC

Oh Jesus. This was amazing. CRYING ALL OVER THE PLACE. beautiful. Amazing. Ugh I love your stories bb. <33

therumjournals April 25 2011, 01:09:03 UTC

ha ha, i love that everyone's reaction to this story is like "UGH I LOVE THIS" :-D thank you so much!