Fic: Empezar

[theredfury]

Title: Empezar
Pairing: David Villa/Lionel Messi
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,300
Disclaimer: Nothing written here is true at all.
Summary: Sort of written for this prompt at footballkink2. In imperfect circumstances and a tough week for David, Leo and David begin.

Comments

[messillaislove]

This. is. beautiful. Really in love with this fill.:D

Aren't you going to write a part 2 to this where they make out at David's place?!

[choco_cups]

I am so unhappy about David not getting enough playing time and the severe lack of Messilla celebrations but this made me feel so much better.:D

I guess my first reaction after I finished reading this was, where is the next part? There has to be a next part!

[believing_you]

"There was no doubting it, David Villa was still just as attractive to Leo as he had been when he first joined the team. Those brown eyes, just as absorbing whether they were soft, or fierce like they were now, the perfect sideburns, even the way he gelled his hair; the set of his mouth, his jaw."<333333 The things your writing does to my Messilla heart. I can't even. All I can say is GREAT JOB as usual.

A sequel sounds so tempting. I would love a sequel. Please write a sequel.:)))

[sunshineshigh]

Wow! What a great fic. Loved it. Would love to read more.

[pickatrick]

I have just really loved all three chapters of 'Draw my heart' and was so happy to see that you've written another Messilla. I love everything you wrote. From their little argument to David's frustration about his ankle discomfort and Leo's desperation to make it up to him and make him feel better.:D:D Then the ending obviously was fantastic and left me with a yearning to find out more about what happens later. Would love a sequel.