Fic: Draw My Heart (and more)

[theredfury]

Title: Draw My Heart (and more) - Chapter 3
Pairing: David Villa/Lionel Messi
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4,098
Disclaimer: Nothing written here is true at all.
Summary: Originally written as a series of drabbles for a prompt at footballkink2, this is a college/university AU where Leo studies art and David is his law-student roommate. I've tidied it up a little, and

Comments

[messillaislove]

"You look very edible." <333 My forever favorite line. I don't really know what to say anymore. Everything is just fantastic and incredibly well-written. Lovely and hot.:D

This isn't the last chapter I hope. You are gonna continue with this, right?

[choco_cups]

However much I loved your last two chapters, I have to say, this is definitely my favorite. Everything you write is just gold, totally perfect. I cannot wait for your next update.:)

[barcalove]

Your fills are simply awesome. I just love the simple, uncomplicated progress of their relationship, from falling in love, to sleeping together when they are both ready, without any need of rushing it, simply because they don't need to, because they don't only need each other physically. You give the feeling that they are the most perfect boyfriends ever. Cameos from everyone, especially Cesc and Iker are awesome too.

Like forever, really really really dying to read more. Please update soon.:)

[this_is_so_fun]

English isn't my 1st Language, so I usually stay away from commenting. But if I read something like this I feel like it is necessary to comment.

""Hey, at least you know I had a touch." David's eyes are bright and teasing for a moment, then Leo presses his open mouth to the head of David's cock through the cotton and he can see the desire spread across his irises, the colour of something sweet and dark. "I just meant," David tries, before his words fall away in a moan."

I just really love and admire your writing style, because you can use perfect words in a particular situation and this adds to the brilliance of your fic. In short, it's a pleasure to read your writing. I am greatly enjoying this. Thank you so much for sharing it. I am very excited to read more. Can't wait.

[crazyfootball]

Wow! What a fantastic chapter, an outstanding collection of drabbles! *hugs you tightly* It's just made my day.

Looking forward (im)patiently for more.