Fic: Cosa de Dos

[theredfury]

Title: Cosa de Dos
Pairing: David Villa/Lionel Messi
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,475
Disclaimer: Nothing written here is true at all.
Summary: Written for this prompt at footballkink2: after David and Leo's brief argument in the game against Granada.

Comments

[theredfury]

Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you liked this!

(I was debating whether to put Pique or Cesc...I don't think it would've made a difference haha)

[lovemessivilla]

First of all, thank you so much for writing this. Seems like the first Messilla fic I have read in months. And after last night's game, this was really required.:)

I love how Leo isn't shy at all and totally offers himself to David with his:
“Forget me tonight,” Leo breathes. “Just fuck me, Villa, like you should.”

But my fav line comes from David:
“I can’t fuck you,” David says, sliding an arm below to grip Leo. Leo swallows. “I love you.”

It was great to read!!!:D

[theredfury]

Haha yes, I feel like Leo wouldn't be shy with people he knows/is close to, like David in this. And as for David, yup, he can't just use Leo. He loves him. <3

Glad you liked it!

[barcalove]

Love this!!! It was hot and cute all at the same time. Really enjoyed this.

I read your other Messilla fic too- HELP. And in both, I love the way you wrote Leo. Mostly people characterise Leo as totally submissive to David. Your writing is a welcome change. Wonder why you don't write them more often?:p

[theredfury]

Thank you!
Ah, definitely - I don't think Leo would be totally submissive to David at all. (The argument on pitch just goes to show that, doesn't it? xD)

I would definitely write them more often, it's just that I so very often simply can't come up with anything more than shreds of a plot!

[sunshineshigh]

This is great and so so hot. Thank you for sharing.

[theredfury]

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it!

[sparksfly7]

it was my prompt :D

thanks so much for filling it! I was so happy when I saw that it was you who wrote it.

I was pretty shocked when I saw them going at each other like that. and I was mad at Leo for yelling at David >:(

when I heard about what David said, I was half in disbelief, half swooning. man, is he shipping them or what? :P

“I can’t fuck you,” David says, sliding an arm below to grip Leo. Leo swallows. “I love you.” aww <333 and the last sentence is perfect.

[theredfury]

I should've known it was your prompt! <3

Same, when I heard about what David said. He must be shipping himself with Leo, consciously or otherwise. xD