Fic: Bed of Roses (Part 14)

Apr 08, 2012 01:16


Title: Bed of Roses (formerly 'Highschool AU')
Chapter: Fourteen
Pairing: Fernando Torres/David Villa
Rating: NC-17 (over all parts)
Disclaimer: Nothing is true, obviously.

Previous parts: Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8 | Part 9 | Part 10 | Part 11 | Part 12 | Part 13

Part 14 )

pairing: torres/villa, fic

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sparksfly7 April 7 2012, 17:50:14 UTC
Fernando eyes the pale skin of David’s stomach, skin that obviously hasn’t seen the Spanish sun as often as skin in other places. That makes Fernando think of other places, then, which makes him swallow. If David did that stuff around me, I'd be throwing my homework away in two seconds flat ;)

Poor Nando :( I hope his father wouldn't really hate him.

“You’re hot when you’re a douche,” Fernando smirks. iawtc. David's hot, period. ♥

I don't know how you keep writing and updating. I haven't posted anything in what feels like 5 billion years.

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theredfury April 9 2012, 14:41:55 UTC
Two seconds? It would take you that long? :P

David is hot, teenager or not :3

and...yes you have! XD You're doing well, keep it up. I WATCHED THE HUNGER GAMES TOO! Peeta is adorable

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tragedyofempty April 7 2012, 17:59:38 UTC
I love this story. Even if I have to wait for more.

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theredfury April 9 2012, 14:43:34 UTC
Thank you! :D and I'm so sorry for the wait...inspiration lives in a different timezone from me :'(

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rosesandstars April 7 2012, 22:13:14 UTC
This part was wonderful. I was literally laughing out loud at the dialogue. Looking forward to more :)

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theredfury April 9 2012, 14:44:20 UTC
Aw, I'm really glad you liked it!

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mirano_100809 April 9 2012, 09:14:11 UTC
FINALLYYYYYY!!! YOU UPDATED!!! I've been waiting for this story like, forever? But well, the wait is totally worth it!

Ahh, I love David and Nando. Their scenes are so...uhm, well, you know what I mean! And Israel was so kind for encouraging his brother. I hope Nando and David's relationship would work til the end!

And you, Mr Pique, it's about time. Finally you confessed to Cesc that you loved him, huh? Took you long enough...and David even had to say that he slept with Cesc, only to hear those words from your mouth.

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“Why don’t you just ask him out?”

“I can’t do that,” Cesc says, scandalised. “People ask me out.”

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I love that part! Cesc, you're so...ughh! Is it that hurt if YOU had to be the one who asked Geri out? But...it worked at the end anyway, so it's okay, I think.

I love this update! And pleasepleaseplease tell me you're going to update this again very soon, you know I love this story so much!

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theredfury April 9 2012, 14:47:57 UTC
Sorry for the wait forever!! xD I'm glad you like the David and Nando scenes, it's nice writing their happy times for once.

Cesc is such a diva. :P Divas do not ask other people out. But at least they're finally together! And all it took was some skilled (or not) lying from David heheh.

As to updating I shall try my very best!!!

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