Fanfiction: Achromatize

[ikui]

Title: Achromatize
Rating: PG
Pairing: Onho
Summary: Coming out does not always involve virtuous bravery.
A/N: About 2900 words. I guess this is kind of a mini-series (more vertical than horizontal) I am doing, since it is all within the same alternate reality as these two fics: Almond Skins and Cynthia and Callaghan.

Comments

[episkia]

this was done so beautifully. i love how you made jjong the accepting one, because as much as i like him being the fail derpy one in fanfiction (kind of like donghae i guess) he's actually so sensitive but objective and can balance the serious with the comedic so well.

and oh man. i guessed the reason for taemin fleeing, but. oh bb. :/

and minho's reaction was perfect.

sobsu i was so happy when i got the alert in my inbox. <3

[potaoto]

one sided ontae oh my heart ;^;

i love your portrayal of jonghyun, since most of the time (and tbh i am guilty of this as well), he is given the slightly dumb, oblivious role. his acceptance and sensitivity is heart warming ♥

and oh the ending, taemin bb let me hug you ;___;

i really liked this ): ♥

[named_lc]

I love ontae and onho, and it was so great. Oh Taemin. Oh.
So beautifully written. So bitter.
memming.

[sweatnitemare]

this is good.
taemin is bipolar.
hahahahaha...
Jinki's right, it should've been better if he was the one who talked to Taemin.
but yeah...it has to be this way.
both of the are very possessive i see.
hahahaha...
and key couldn't see this coming? he's a lot girlier than anyone of them. hahahahaha...
anyways, awesome. i need more onho.
a laid back one like this.

[honeyflavor]

Loved it ♥