Fanfiction: Gumdrops and Clovers - Part 1

[ikui]

Title: Gumdrops and Clovers
Chapter 1: Gumdrops
Rating: PG
Pairing: Onho
Summary: Patients cross paths in the hospital.
A/N: About 2500 words. Kind of skeptical about this fic...

Comments

[kaiauro]

Continue! :D
I love me some Onho.

(I'm a silent reader that loves your fics to death.)

[episkia]

damnit how did i miss this in my inbox

CONTINUE

this is so beautiful i can't. you never force passages of description but there's something so poetic in the way you write, i seriously was there in that room with them, watching jinki curled up in the refrigerator with his gumballs flooding the floor.

and onho is forever my favourite for fanfics, and this au is too gorgeous i can't

[civilized_era]

Ugh you have such good flow. I don't ever get disjointed or detached from your writing because it's just like, exactly how a story should be told. And it's so obvious, there is so much love there -- which is always important, loving your characters, even if you put them through hell -- and precisely because of that, I trust you! you're captain of the HMS Onho (needs a better title), after all! Plus, I kind of really need to know what happens next -- Minho's predicament thoroughly tests his theory of never giving up, but my curiosity mainly lies with Monsieur Lee Jinki, human anomaly. Nothing about this seems OOC to me, just saying; the ending is a little ominous, though D: <333

[playingods]

i think this isn't ooc, you write them just fine and i love it :D you should continue~ i want to know what will happen to Minho and what caused jinki to be hospitalized, and onho's relationship progress of course :3

thanks for sharing! <3

[jinkibumiminho]

Lovely! Your descriptions created a vivid picture in my mind. I'm just sad that Minho's life/style is in jeopardy, and Onew appears to have...issues.

I'm intrigued!